Andrew

@grcr

I’m praying.🩷

@esther-c

Someone’s always sick this time of year.😖Praying.

@whalekeeper

Tag me if you do!

*sighs* I still have 200 words to write.😅

@highscribeofaetherium

I wouldn’t be offended, but you would have every reason to expect revenge.

@linus-smallprint

Ugh, Alan actually did it. I was hoping he’d come to his senses. The ending of that chapter is the kind that always makes me and my siblings chant “read another chapter!” when my dad does read alouds. Anyway, I think the descriptions of magic were fine. It’s fantasy, and you made it all up.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Nahim scene (which will probably end up in my book)

275 words

“Life for me has been…dark since they died.” Nahim turned his face away.

Master Canin wrapped his arm around Nahim’s shoulders like a father, pulling him close. “I know, Nahim. The war has taken away my daughter. It’s been years since I’ve seen her.”

N…

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@whalekeeper

Ooh, fun question. I would write a suicide note and throw one of my coats in the river so it looks like I drowned myself.

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Amelia

(I hope to have Stephen and David soon)

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Older Joseph

@linus-smallprint

Saw a movie with this in recently and it was painful.

Don’t get me started.

I have some of the boards done. Not all of them tho.

@the_lost-journal

Sorry I took so long to get back to this. I vote A!

@ellette-giselle

sounds good. Again, it’s your book. But, for me the spell images being described or not would be the difference between me putting down the series at this book or continuing if I had bought the book or checked it out in their library.

Gochya.

haha! That’s a good one to watch movies with always. No, Clear Play. 

Ah. Yeah, that’s useful.

@linus-smallprint

sounds good. Again, it’s your book. But, for me the spell images being described or not would be the difference between me putting down the series at this book or continuing if I had bought the book or checked it out in their library.

CP == Christian Perspective?

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@ellette-giselle

Hmm. well, first of all the fact that the church has stopped being attacked. Then a reference Sabina made in her letter about the soldiers being super tense. Then Joseph notices the same thing.

Ah…

I know poor Joseph!!! I’m really glad he went and talked to Mr. Caddick about it instead of just spending a good chunk of the book w…

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@keilah-h

What I meant by “breaks immersion” is that I didn’t really want to pay attention to the spells. They have no use to me. They’re deeply evil in Alan’s world and useless in mine, so what reason do I have for needing them in my memory?

Makes sence.

Also the Tyn-Oliver fight was a little confusing to me after Alan’s muddled spell mind, so I…

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@ellette-giselle

You can’t separate spell casting from demonic power. The Bible makes that clear. So, if wyou want the spell casting, your going to have to keep the other part in mind. 

Okay. I might have to rework things then, but that’s okay. I’ve talked to my sister, who knows more of my plans for book 2 about this, and she does agree that th…[Read more]

@liberty

No, it’s totally fine. I was just being dramatic.

I’m glad you enjoy the sections.

@linus-smallprint What I meant by “breaks immersion” is that I didn’t really want to pay attention to the spells. They have no use to me. They’re deeply evil in Alan’s world and useless in mine, so what reason do I have for needing them in my memory?

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Anybody want to see some Character Aesthetics?!?!?

@linus-smallprint

SEVENTH TIME IT DELETED MY POST. GRRRR

You can’t separate spell casting from demonic power. The Bible makes that clear. So, if wyou want the spell casting, your going to have to keep the other part in mind.

Okay, I got through about twenty seconds of the first song.

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