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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
What is up with KP? I haven’t gotten any notifs.
No. You’re fine to keep it in. Instead of feeling like it something I needed to get over for the next part, this felt more like setting the stage for the climax.
Okay, that makes sense.
Do you ever get your dad to look over these sermon/speeches?
My dad actually hasn’t r…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The Protector-Gabriel
“The Fourth Protector. He painted the broken chains on my mask. I am the Fifth, I painted on the flower.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle ohhh, I understand now.
(I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣)
Just cause you’re a woman doesn’t mean you can’t write impactful things.
Like yeah, the Bible specifically says that only men should be pastors cause it mirrors them being fathers and heads of hou…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper lollllll yes
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay, here’s a question for y’all.
No. You’re fine to keep it in. Instead of feeling like it something I needed to get over for the next part, this felt more like setting the stage for the climax.
(I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣)
Do you ever get your dad to look ov…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
@theducktator oh that’s interesting, my dad is going on a plane trip tomorrow too! Not that early though.
I’ll be praying for both of them.
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
@theducktator lol love the pfp and new name!
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The Protector-Gabriel
“The mask was inherited from my mentor.” Despite Leander’s agitated tone, Gabriel’s voice remained the same calm, measured tone. “I also object to you going alone. You are too reckless. You wouldn’t last a day in my line of occupation. If you so wish, we can go just the two of us, and leave everyone else…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
It was late into the evening before the meeting finally broke up. Julian’s words had shaken the little church, and they were ready and open to hear more. As Leon and Julian took turns speaking to them and en…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The Protector-Gabriel
Gabriel sighed. “People don’t follow princes who make fun of them. Also, I advise you be careful what you say under your breath. I have sharp ears.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@keilah-h   @linus-smallprint   @hybridlore
Okay, here’s a question for y’all.
So, I personally really like Julian’s speech/sermon, whatever it is. (I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣) Anyhow, I really like some of the themes it hits, I like the flow. Basically, I perso…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Well, first off, this is Julian we’re talking about. Leon had more understanding for them. Second, this is really their first time going through something like this. The last time was in Ardenta, and Ardentans have a certain brute stubbornness and willingness to just hang on that a lot of other cultures don’t. (That’s part of why…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.
Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.
mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.
Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Hmm, the problem is, I’m trying not to drag things like “greek” and “hebrew” in because that muddies the world a bit because it is technically an alternate reality.
Well, it’s a bit of a chopped up version (due to space. Who made the rule of 100 characters anyways?!) But it’s a Chesterton quote that reads,
“The great march of…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
My dad is flying tomorrow morning, (at like 4 something) and then home on Saturday. There have been quite a few airplane accidents recently, so prayers for his safety please!
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*Notices were already on page 3* Okay, I’ll touch on this soon. I’m drawing right now. XD
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