@raxforge
Active 6 months, 4 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
don’t all eyes have blood in them though?
True, just his are completely red in the sclera
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
Guy with eyes that look like they have blood in them tries to get revenge on humanoid spider.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*
I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.
Maybe.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint Just so you know, you accidentally put chapter 33 before chapter 32, and you have chapter 30 twice.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
About how much of the book is left?
For now it is still fine. I still need to finish up what I am working on and will still be on Kingdom Pen until then. I just didn’t want to start helping with something new.
Need to apply for some jobs, but I will check the chapters after.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator
Chapter 33 out!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I put the chapter on the drive yesterday, but ran out of time to let people know about it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m going to the BMV to take my learner’s permit test. Please pray that I pass.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.
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Enid replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through? -
Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Perfect!
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Agreed. We could let it move at whatever pace it can without needing to flip back 392764683 pages.
Yes! I haven’t had time to open it up yet (word is on the computer) but I’m hoping to in the next hour (we got an extended lunch break today!!!!).
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