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Active 6 months, 4 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Isaiah really does have a wonky moral code, ngl.
I know. But that’s what makes him interesting and why I had to write this down.
I like how the perspective is that of the not-dog, whatever he is. Him getting distracted by the food was hilarious.
Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr
( @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @jonas @power )
Next Chapters!!! (2 of them!!!)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay. I fixed that. Thank you!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
🤣
But it did! Really!
See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”
It…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.
Thank you! She’s entirely finished book one in this series, and the full thing should be in the document.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool.
Okay. Glad to hear that!
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.
i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)
I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD
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Enid replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
yours are so wacky lol
The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃
Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.
Life be like that sometimes.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks! Word was what I was having difficulty with. I’m going to see if I’m allowed to have an account there.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Can you try resharing the link? It just takes me to the login page. 😭
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Yay! I forgot it was Tuesday. XD
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Great! Does bio stand for biology? Because if so, wow. Biology is HARD.
Thanks!
I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.
Some of the material will depend on state and my…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae ohhh okay.
“blood eyes” sounds creepy but the concept properly described is actually really cool.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
btw I’m still working on that one story I promised you. I just have to type it up.
I was gonna do it today but my dad called me over and is basically offering me a job at the architecture firm he works at. So I had to listen cause I don’t have a job yet and coloring over floor plans all day sounds more fun than minimum wage at a grocery sto…[Read more]
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