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Nice to see I won’t be alone 🙂
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)Also I just had an idea. What if, as Chase got closer to certain people, he started associating them in his mind with different animals depending on their personality? Could be a way he gets more comfortable around some people. Just an idea though. You can use if you want or not.
That is an awesome idea! And it sounds just like something Chase would do! thank you.
But any ways, Chase is so cute <3
I’m glad you like him. I’ve been pondering his story lately. Quick question, what would you think if I gave him a little sister? She wouldn’t be anything like him, she’d be an extroverted, bright girl. They’d be sun and moon, light and darkness. Do you think it’s a good idea or is Chase best alone?
Chase
Chase froze like a deer in a car’s headlights, eyes black and face shadowed by his hoodie, until unexpectedly, he brightened, His eyes turn a bright green like that of the baby leaves in spring. “Heh-heh-hehdge-hoh… Hedgehogs!” He finally got the word out.
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)Sorry that I haven’t been active. I wasn’t sure what to rp, and there was alot of life stuff I was working with.
Chase
Chase shook his head. “Wha-what t-teach-er g-gives t-tree l-less-ons?” Besides, if you want to climb trees, you can talk to squirrels about it. They can tell you all kind of things about the different kind of trees and the best tree limbs to run along on. If you can handle the little mockeries they make at humans, you can learn quite a lot, Chase thought, eyes slowly turning green as he focused more on his inner thoughts than Felicity beside him or the teacher in the tree. Bears know more about trees than you expect. Mama bears can tell you which ones the cubs love to climb most, and all bears can tell you where to find the strongest trees in the forest. Birds can only tell you about the ones they love to perch on and sing, and the ones that produce the sweet fruits. They know less than you’d expect, or so it seems. I suspect they know more than they let on, for sharing more would reveal where they nested, and it’s a bird’s vow never to do that. It was so that Chase ran through many of his little forest friends, deciding how much they really knew about trees. Wolves, for all the things they know on other subjects, know nothing about trees. The wildcats are moody and don’t like sharing things. Hedgehogs know nothing except how cozy the fallen leaves are to curl up into. Chase let out a tiny giggle at the thought of the little spiky balls that never seemed to have any thoughts going on behind their little snouts and beady eyes except food and the coziest place to sleep.
After this giggle, he remembered Felicity, and his eyes went black immediately. “S-sorry,” he mumbled for no real reason.
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)Thanks
Chase
Chase didn’t know what to think of the chaotic sight, so he stared with blank, black eyes, face half cast in shadow by his hoodie. “Why T-teach-er in t-tree?” A single flicker of purple came to Chase’s eyes, then died again.
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)Yeah, sorry.
Um, Chase would prefer puppy.
I’ll write a quick rp for him to get things moving along
He wasn’t as fearsome as she had pictured after the fight the previous night. Instead he seemed kind and gentle, more so than most other people she had met.
It’s funny to think of Chase as fearsome, he’s just so…not usually.
Chase
“I should get to class,” she said to Chase. “But I can help you figure out where yours is first if you want. There’s a bulletin board around the corner with the schedule and map pinned up on it.”
“I-I…” Chase looked at the floor, eyes dark. He didn’t want to go to class. He sighed and then was silent, not sure what he should say.
I’m sorry, that probably isn’t helpful at all. Long day.
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)Wordy writing styles.
As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.
I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today
1. What is your full name?
“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”
2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?
“I’m training to be a doctor because of my crazy older brother named Alpha.”
3. What is your body language right now? [Describe them in the interview, sitting/standing, fidgeting, etc.]
Nar is sitting still, confident, hands folded on her lap, eyes forward and focused.
4. How would other people describe you?
“Hmm… I’d like to think they’d describe me as a dedicated caretaker who smiles a lot, but you’d have to ask them.”
5. Where do you live? What is your race/ethnicity?
“I live in different places at different times. My family has a vacation home on the planet Laxor, but their normal home is on Banor, near Master Milcah’s training academy. When I’m not with my family there, I’m with my Mistress stationed at a hospital near the edges of the Realn tri-solar system.”
6. What do you contribute to your world?
“I help people. That is my purpose.”
7. What kind of struggles do you face in your everyday life?
“Dealing with difficult patients (like Alpha) and struggling with long tiring hours with very little sleep.”
8. What motivates you?
“Originally, I was motivated by trying to help Alpha, now what motivates me is not only him, but also all those who I have helped. I’m motivated by the act of helping to make other people’s lives better, if that makes sense.”
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)Aww Chase, you’re the best disney princess ever.
I have that meme you made a while back saved on the family computer.
Chase
Blue sprang into Chase’s eyes. “F-fawns fr-friends. I-I puh-tect lit-tle o-ones.”
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)My first written stories were about the tales I used to tell my little brother about a land called Nutmag (not Nutmeg, NutMAG huge difference, I know). It had talking animals and no humans. I even had a theme song for it that I’d sing before telling Ezra a story. I wrote at least three short stories only about two to three pages long. I still have two of them, but the third I gave to a sixth grader in VBS (I was like in third grade or something).
My second written story was one I don’t really talk about much on here The Solomon Team. It was my first attempt at a novel and let’s just say the only parts I’m proud of is the main character, Robert, and that it’s handwritten.
My last handwritten story (except a few little short snippet, stories, and scenes) was an entire novel first draft for Guardian Angels. I’m very proud of that.
If you asked about my first story I came up with, Idr. All my life I have created characters, heroes who I would fall to sleep too as I thought up stories for them.
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)Chase
Chase looked at the floor, his eyes black. “Th-that’s sad. S-shall I in-intro-duce him s-sometime? A-all p-people should know f-fawns.” chase made a motion with his hand, as if petting some invisible animal.
Brussel Sprouts
#AnduthForever (💕)Okay, so my brain has been reading things with interesting twists to words. I literally just read that as “We’ve reached 500 papayas, guys.”
I almost choked on my yogurt XD
Chase
Chase was confused. Did she not know if this person was a friend or not? “D-does he l-like f-faw, fawwwns?” It was random, and not the best type of question to keep the conversation going, but Chase wished to know.
Brussel Sprouts
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