Ruth

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @rae @loopylin @savannah_grace2009

This pop/soda/soda pop thing!!!

im dying 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I was born in Ohio and everyone there calls it pop, but in Az everyone calls it soda. So I can go either way, but it will always be pop first and foremost.
and pokey is a good way of describing…

@rae @jonas

I’ve never written something that makes me cry…But then again I don’t usually cry reading anything.

Well…hehe….I once wrote a dumb story (last spring) about these kids. One of the older brothers got pushed off a water tower (it’s dumb okay???) and I wrote the siblings grieving over him….I actually started tearing up and almos…[Read more]

@rae @highscribeofaetherium

I didn’t notice it either.

Selius

Selius eyed the woman incredulously. “What–? You have no idea what you’re talking about.”

@rae

Marcel

“Look, Chase,” Marcel tried, “you’re avoiding peeps who could help you. You’re sitting around with that look on your face, wearing dark clothes… in theory, it looks kinda cool, but I don’t think those strats are too cheerful.”

He began unwrapping a straw from its paper tube. His pink eyebrows rose, painted with honesty. “You’r…[Read more]

*delayed response*

@loopylin

You hit the nail on the head girl 😝 I died when I saw that image, my sister thought I choked on something

@rae

Marcel

Marcel didn’t admit how much that made sense to him – because it did. A lot. He clutched his wrist, the feathers smashed against the bracelet beads. But one side of him remained calm and passive, a…[Read more]

@rae

I’m sorry to hear you’re under the weather! would you like me to give you  my critique on this?

Also, with the whole speedering versus speedeering, you could also try speed-deering or something along those lines, as if Nahim struggles with ‘ur’ sounds, changing them to ‘ear’. where else does his accent show? Does wording sound off? how…[Read more]

@rae

You’re good. I don’t think anyone else noticed it either.

@rae

Either he tried to edit it and Wyoh ate it, or nobody noticed my last RP, cuz I can’t see anything 🤷‍♀️

@rae

Wait, he did? I must’ve missed it…

@rae

Idk, not, like, really old. It depends.

@rae

I bake a lot, and over three quarters of my recipes say just “soda”.

Huh, they do? I’ve never seen that, and I bake pretty often.

Maybe they want you to pour some Coca-Cola in there lol

@rae

Oh okay. Maybe make that more obvious somehow. You could spell in speedearing, which looks more distinct. It’s easy to not notice when the only difference is the repetition of a letter.

@rae

The only thing I noticed was this:

“Nahim, I still think you should have joined the speeder races. Your speedering is excellent.”

“My brother’s speedeering was exquisite.” A small point was made on the last word.

“Speedeering? What kinda of a word is that?”

Mandin used “speedering” first, but then he calls Nahim out on the word when he uses it.

@rae

I LOVE how you described Wyoh….lolol!

@kyronthearcanin Wow, blue hair?? XD Yeah, I would like to pay more attention to it so that my characters are more different, so I thought it would be fun to see what everyone on here does. Looks like you’ve done a pretty good job on it though!😅

@rae

Cool! Yeah, it’s funny how our characters kind of reflect different parts of ourselves. And…[Read more]

@calyhuge

I love itttt 😏😂

@rae

Yesss, let’s do it! *evil author laugh* That would be so funny. Especially if they learn some sort of ballroom dancing where you change partners throughout. 🤣

@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Sorry guys, but I’m going to have to leave this RP to focus more on my writing. Just thought I’d let you know!

@rae

hahahhahaha that’s so awesome!
I won’t anger her, I promise XD