Ruth

@Rae

This is a great Villain! he’s got a solid personality, values, and reasons why he does what he does. I think I know who Alpha is though😉😉! My one caution is not to let him off too easy for what he did, even if it was out of revenge, and why did his race get killed off in the first place? did they have a bad reputation?

@acancello

Aww thanks girl! <333

@highscribeofaetherium @grcr

Thanks guys.

@jonas

I find it weird and dumb how there are kids who are so obsessed with sports and look down on more “academic” things (honestly what are they doing at school?)

Exactly!! You’re at school to learn, not to play sports….contrary to popular belief XD

 because publi…

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@rae

What is wrong with Seb? Does he have mental issues or something?

🤣🤣🤪

Um… yeeeeeesssss…

But no, not like that, this is just him having fun and like Loops said, he’s eccentric. And he’s almost eleven years old here, so he’s partially impulsive too. I have realized as a teen, he has more mental issues than any of my other characters,…[Read more]

@rae

Plus the different shades! I’m a geek about eye colors, so much so I often notice colors no one else sees in each others eyes.

That’s really cool. I never really thought much into how colors of people’s eyes look in certain lights.

@rae

And you too (didn’t see it at first.) I’m praying God guides you through whatever you’re going through.

@rae @savannah_grave2009

I’ll be praying for you guys ❤️

@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @rae

Should this group run into another group? Their conversations don’t seem to be going anywhere. Too many introverts XD.

@freedomwriter76 @jonas @rae

Sef

She saw the way that the man held the girl’s hand, and a tear slipped down her cheek before she could wipe it away. It reminded her so much of her father….and where was he now? She had no father to hold her hand, no one to wipe away her tears for her when she was abused by Iver…and she deserved it.

She kept…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Just pulled this from another forum…

 

I think that is all I have for now on Glace.

Btw, this all happened over a hundred years or so, since Fettians and Realn have long lives (thinks to some immortal blood.)
#HugRikerSquad
#LetsCauseChaos
BEWARE my charries know how to make swiss cheese! XD
November 3, 2023 at 10:11…

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@rae

BEWARE my charries know how to make swiss cheese! XD

I’m dying….lol!

@rae

I will be praying for you💗

@rae

I’ll be praying for you! 💛💛

@rae

Ok so I totally gave you my thoughts on ch 2, but they didn’t post 😭! I’ll try again lol, but it might take me a while.

It does! I’m also asking these questions to help you flesh out your world a bit more, since I know having someone to bounce off of can help a lot, and so you can get some ideas for where to take the story if you’re…[Read more]

@rae @freedomwriter76

I think I write mostly masculine MC’s cuz I worry if I’m portraying women right, I mean, I want strong characters, but I don’t want my feminines becoming basically masculines in women’s bodies. Ya know?

I gravitate towards writing male characters for the same reason, except for me, as a guy, it’s even harder XD. Initially…[Read more]

@rae

Ok. There’s no rush. (:

@rae

Aww, Chaseeee 😭

(Btw, is he still going to show up at the dance lessons? Because I bet Callie will see through him and know something’s wrong right away and be like, “Alright, boy, ‘fess up.” …ok, not exactly like that, but you know what I mean. 🤣)

@freedomwriter76 @rae

I don’t think I have ever written from the perspective of a male character… I don’t know how XD But I guess it’s a little intimidating having never done it.

@rae

My charries almost never have colored hair or makeup, probably because 1, I mostly write fantasy so it would seem really out of place for someone or have blue hair, and 2, I have zero internet in smearing wax and powder all over my face aka makeup, so I usually forget it exists lol.

@rae

Seb is just endearingly eccentric✨

@calyhuge

deep breaths deep breaths she can’t actually read my mind

actually, scratch that thought

My powers span all rational thought 😈

@rae

Wow, I was not expecting that.

He is way too blunt sometimes 😅

Marcel

“I don’t think you’re TRYING to understand ANYONE ELSE,” Marcel yelled like a thunderclap.

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