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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
You got thissssss XDXD I’m on Christmas break and am going nOwhEre so, behold.
…Everyone does stupid stuff XD BUT I would not call you stupid. You have an innocent track record on here, and that would be unnecessarily villainous of me.
It’s official, Nar has a crush on Hugo already.
OH MYYy that’s so sweet of her!
I just hope he…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Babs
“Oh Baaaaaaabs…” The Vinlin’s warm, boyish face turned to her, streaked with dark curls. He tied his coat around his waist and held out his hands. “Come on!”
Babs fussed with her clothes and hair one moment too long, and he pulled her onto the dance floor.
With a squeak, she tried her very best – but what was she supposed to focus on? H…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae @vinagirl @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @acancello @hybridlore @anyone-else
Okay, guys. I need serious help. My novel is kind of going nowhere…because I don’t know which way to start it!!!
I have two beginnings for my story. One jumps straight into…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
The dancing has begun!
Hehehe…
Alright, I’ll write some RPs
Lukas
Lukas swallowed hard and faced Liv with an uncertain smile wobbling on his lips. “Well?” He held out his arms.
@rae (I said in here that Chase was dancing, but I don’t know what you decided to do)
Callista
She smiled, all tears dried, and met Fynn’s ey…[Read more]
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I see… I would recommend thinking of a theme/topic to intertwine each story into and have the ending be a culmination of that theme/topic to communicate your message in the character’s actions and choices, and how they’re rewarded/punished. E.g. Star Wars (I block quoted it for spoilers, if you haven’t seen them yet and spoilers bother…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Aww, thx, he loves making people happy, it makes him happy 😊
Hugo
The dance was so simple, Hugo could do it with his eyes closed. And he did. Holding Nar’s hands gently, he glided through the steps, and tilted his head up with a blissful smile.
When Nar did a funny spin under one arm, the slender boy laughed and gave her another twirl. H…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Sef
She flinched back at the man’s voice.
It reminded her of too much….
No. She would not think about Iver now….
Cowering back into the shadows, she hoped he wouldn’t notice her. Or ask her any questions.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@everyone
…I’m just going to answer my own question and start the practice 😅😊
Hugo
“Why should you apologize? Look at that,” Hugo beamed. He rolled down his sleeve and spun his arm like a pinwheel.
Nar slung her satchel around to her opposite shoulder. Her face flushed faintly with confidence.
Hugo looked at her again, checked himself…[Read more]
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Ok that helps me understand the overall story better, so you’re basically going for something very similar to Star Wars (before Disney got a chokehold on it 😭) but with a Christian worldview writing it, and probably some of Joseph’s story from Genesis thrown in.
I recommend Odd 1s Out’s video on pitching a show to help when explaining to…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 10 months ago
I’ll be praying for you guys! I’m sorry it’s been so rough.
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley @calyhuge @loopylin @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @rae @anyone-I-missed
Alright… y’all’s charries might already be all paired up, but I’m adding in my two new charries nonetheless. Hehehe. They don’t belong to a story yet because… well I got an idea for them before I got any ideas for their story. XD fyi, they don’t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Hugo
Nar gave a beautiful smile, and Hugo instantly smiled back.
“Now I can answer your questions,” he said. “I’m from… well, I’m not from Lovedream, but I live there. It’s a pretty weird city stationed in between nothing and nothing, as my brother likes to say. I am not hurt, and I don’t hurt myself often.”
The young man took off his…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Hugo
Seb made a disgusted face and headed towards the nearest mirrored wall to look himself over. This was lucky; one could never have a conversation with the euphoric child listening in.
Nar immediately began firing questions.
Hugo laughed along, scattering light across his face. “Woah there, stallion’s girl. Way too many questions. Let…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
If you want, I could add Sef if calyhuge’s character doesn’t fit him. Sef knows pain, she’s been abused and would probably relate to him. she too has skeletons in the closet that she doesn’t like to talk about…so yeah….
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m going to use a description from a previous RP for him (because I really like it ❤️):
“The boy’s legs were impressively tall – having a delicate, refined look, like a spider’s – with only a hint of creepiness. His face was warm, round, and kind, and his hair the color of a red maple leaf, in a spiky swirl on the back of his skull. An am…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 10 months ago
Ouch! Ill be praying for you, hope you recover quickly <3
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Cool with me! I just thought it would be nice to RP the dance with someone else’s charrie as a partner. If Hugo and Nar practice together tonight, he’d probably ask her 😉
If you were planning to start the lessons, that’s great, go ahead 😝 Thank you!
I agree with Esther – you’ve definitely gotten better at writing…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I meant eight in the previous post. I just noticed it says right.
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