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I’ll be praying as well! 💕🙏

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The Twins 

Eddie huffed.

She knew she was being difficult, but she didn’t want to cut Dante any slack. She would rather lock him in a room and set it on fire and see how he liked it.

Now that she thought about it, that would likely make his day.

She huffed again. Stupid.

She turned, stomped to one end of the room, realized…[Read more]

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I’ll be praying.

@rae just prayed and will continue to do so! 💖💖

@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @theducktator @rae @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-pls-helpppppppp-XD

Ok, so I have a bit of a plot hole.

For those of y’all who don’t know, I have five characters (all of whom are MC’s in their own novel) who I have…[Read more]

@rae oooh very cool!

@esther-c Honestly, the very fact that you can come up with an idea and have it as a short story is great, when I have ideas they always either turn into a whole saga or become a scene in a larger work.

The idea itself is interesting! I’d say write it!

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True. Though, I was known for a ridiculously large smile when I was little(r) so large both rows were at least partly visible. And that one stupid canine tooth that grew faster than my other teeth that for a while looked kinda like I had a short fang. Anyways, I often imagine that wide smile on Mandin. So it’s not completely wrong, but tha…

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Sebzter

“Look.” Seb waved his hand in Dante’s direction, trying to keep a cool smile. “He’s in a stage of personal redemption right now. Can’t you see it in his eye, his furrowed brow, his jaw set with years of self-satisfying ways, brought on by an uncertain childhood? You don’t have to, heaven forbid, trust him. But cut the g…[Read more]

@rae ok, if you haven’t noticed, I changed Jaylen’s recognition of Hunter to more of a “huh, do I know him?”

Jaylen

The little creature clapped her hands, spilling water everywhere, before somehow pulling the water she’d splashed Silvanis with back from him.

“Fascinating.” Jaylen crouched onto all fours and studied it. “Is it yours?”

Hunter…[Read more]

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Ed and Dante

Dante shrugged carelessly and looked away. Eddie glared lasers at him as she spoke.

“Long story, but basically he abandoned us in a collapsing building. That. Was on. Fire.”

“It was an accident,” Dante said quickly.

“Was not.”

“Alright, but I wasn’t trying to bring down the whole building. You were fine, anyw…[Read more]

@rae lol

it certainly won’t improve when the other charrie I might add shows up either. I’m planning to save him for when they’re actually on the quest you talked about though.

@rae It’s not an insult, Silvanis, you silly! I don’t believe Jaylen’s actually seen humans or any humanoid besides dragons before tbh. Hunter has, but he’s not the one talking.

Hunter

“I’m not little! And just so you know, I can actually fly! Wings or not.” Silvanis snapped, baring his fangs at them, shortly before Mayfly splashed him with…[Read more]

@rae tbh the concept of them actually being demons or hallucinations (or both for that matter) makes sense to me.

and no I don’t get scared by mythology stuff either. Like you said, it’s either not real, or if it is, it can’t harm us.

Jaylen

“Any ideas on your end?” Silvanis asked.

Jaylen shook her head. “That dragon’s an Icewraith, a…[Read more]

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Oki-doki makes sense 🤘

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I started typing a reply like 3 times and then forgot to send it. Oops.

I’m glad Mandin isn’t evil! I liked your scene, and I didn’t see any major problems.

The door to the cockpit slid open, and in stepped a muscular man, with black roots to his blond hair, a pale brown face, and gecko brown eyes. His Realn armor was a light chocolate milk…

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@whalekeeper @esther-c (Hmm, he’s probably been playing since he was…mmm 10 probably. His mother taught him how to play, hehe. Although he stopped for several years…so he’s probably played for around…7 years or so?? He stopped after he married Iris, but still remembers how to play. (he even plays it in Freedom’s Fire once <3)) @rae @koshka @e…[Read more]

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To clarify, this scene comes before the last one I shared.

Oh, okay. I couldn’t tell, but it seemed like Nahim potentially told Mandin something in between these two scenes, so I assumed they were in order. Got it 😊

I feel like Nahim’s backstory is an important secret that he doesn’t talk about. But couldn’t Mandin research what happens t…[Read more]