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@corissa-maiden-of-praise
Wow! Nice work. 🙂

@zcpeterson
It looks like I’m the sanestest person here. It is wonderfulling to meat you! *insane laughter* *struggles to keep a straight face*
Seriously now. Welcome!
@bluejay, I’ll take some of that chocolate! You know what they say: “Eat a chocolate bar every day, and the doctor will stay far away!” Something like that. 🙂

Okay, I’m done.

Pretty, @Alia. Just a couple things I noticed.

God keeps His eyes the fallen leaves
The leaves the the trees deem of no consequence

God keeps His eyes on the fallen people
The people that the world deems of no consequence

If God keeps His eyes on the fallen of the world,
What right does the world have to say “No consequence”

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I am 14 and my birthday is August 11.

I like it, @anne-of-lothlorien. However, I feel like something is missing. If you’re going for darker, then it needs to BE darker. (Ask someone more experienced with poetry for help there. 🙂 ) Right now I feel like it’s a little whimsical, and if that’s what you’re going for, great job! (You could use Daeus’s idea to make it even more so.)
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Welcome, @julia-r! It’s awesome that you like to draw and paint. Me too! My parents went to Mackinac Island for their 20 year anniversary last year. I’ve heard it’s beautiful. 🙂 Anyway, hi!

@christi-eaton Yeah, the Indiana Jones ride at Disneyland is one of the best. 😉

Hi, @Alia! I like comics, but have never written one. That’s cool that you do, though! I’m not sure I could do caricatures either, @kate-flournoy! I don’t know if I’ve actually ever attempted it. Something to try. 😉

Hi, @Alia! I have never written a comic strip in my life. That’s cool that you do, though! I’m not sure I could do caricatures either, @kate-flournoy! I don’t know if I’ve actually ever attempted it. Something to try. 😉

I agree with @dragon-snapper. Also, any hard sounds. Like ‘k’ and ‘t’ for example.

@hannah-c
Looks good to me! Your story sounds very interesting. 🙂

Wow, @bluejay! This is so good! And the shape…brilliant. 🙂

@dragon-snapper
If I didn’t write, my mind would explode with all my ideas. I heard a quote by Ernest Hemingway saying, “There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.”
That’s really all writing is to me. It’s pouring my heart onto paper.
My goal with my writing is to glorify God. Even if I’m never published, I hope…[Read more]

I agree with @daeus, but…hmmm. It sounds very interesting, @clairec. 😉

@bluejay
1. The Witch of Blackbird Pond
2. Ella Enchanted (even though I’ve read it twice. It’s amazing!) 🙂

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
So, you need a name for the individual books in the trilogy. I think I need just a bit more information before I begin giving you ideas (and mark my words, they may not be good ones. 😉 )

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
So, you need a name for the individual books in the trilogy. I think I need just a bit more information before I begin giving you ideas (and mark my words, they may not be good ones. :))

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
I have a question: are you asking for advise on the names of the individual books in the trilogy? I may have missed that…

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
I have a question: are you looking for a name for the individual books in the trilogy? I may have missed that…

Ooohhh…lovely. Great work, @bluejay. 🙂

@hope
I like the second one better, but they both work. I noticed just one thing.

The name he is give appears nearly impossible to live up to, no matter what he sacrifices.

I’m assuming you meant “name he is GIVEN appears…” 😉