The Idea – Poem - Kingdom Pen

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September 1, 2016 at 9:11 pm #16691
BlueJay
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Here’s another poem for critiquing.

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(I’ve had to do it with a photo, so that it’s the right shape.) 🙂
September 1, 2016 at 9:12 pm #16692
BlueJay
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Sorry it’s on the side. I can’t rotate it. 🙁
September 1, 2016 at 10:57 pm #16704
ClaireC
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@bluejay, Wow! this is fabulous! I love the way you go from one word, ‘nothing’, to lots and then one, ‘idea’ again at the end. 🙂

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September 2, 2016 at 3:32 am #16710
Sarah Hoven
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@bluejay That’s cool! The shape is a lightbulb, right?
September 2, 2016 at 3:38 am #16711
BlueJay
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@sarah-h Yep. 🙂
September 2, 2016 at 9:25 am #16715
Greta
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@Bluejay Wow, I’m so impressed! That is SO cool. It looks like a lightbulb (I’m assuming that’s what you were aiming for 😉 ). Keep up the great work!
September 2, 2016 at 9:31 am #16718
Ingrid
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Wow, @bluejay! This is so good! And the shape…brilliant. 🙂

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September 2, 2016 at 9:52 am #16723
Snapper
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This poem describes my life…lightbulb!

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