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@whalekeeper Yess another school rp meme to add to my collection hehe

@rae

Dante

Dante stared at the knife for a long moment, not responding. It stabbed through his coat sleeve, pinning it to the door. Once his heartbeat slowed back down, he let out a deep breath and pulled out the knife.

“Nah, just nicked me,” he said, casually handing it back to Alpha.

He then took off his coat, showing the shallow cut on his…[Read more]

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @the_lost-journal @keilah-h

I rewrote the first chapter with all of your suggestions in mind, do you want me to post it for your thoughts/critiques?

@theducktator

Ducks???👀

Indeed. It’s from one of the episodes of Martha Speaks, and that’s all I’ll say.

@whalekeeper

I’m following along! And I’ll answer any group questions you post; for now, I’ll stay quiet. *Ninja reads*

Yay, glad to hear that!!

@ellette-giselle

i am so relieved Jack is still there!! Also, I have a feeling I’m going to like Dylan.
just a hunch.

I hope you like Dylan too, he’s probably my second favorite character to write.

also, I’m not sure about Olivia and Adaline’s reaction. You see, when people bully others it tends to be because of insecurity and cowardice. I have…

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@keilah-h

Old Hunter is based off a copperhead snake! He has a scar cutting under his right eye, across his nose, and then just stopping over his left one, and probably a couple smaller scars on the left side of his face. I tried to make him look Sniper-like but still be his own character. I also really like the camo pattern I gave his…

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@liberty

I’m going to be able to submit something!!!!!!!

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Y’all were talking about British and Australian exclamations and it reminded me of something that happened recently…

So we have friends who are Australian, but their dad is the only one who actually naturally has the accent. I’m a sucker for the Aussie accent, lol. And I was talking with him one time and with some…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Some things I’d really like to hear from y’all are scene ideas. I’m planning to go back and extend a lot of the earlier chapters (at least 1-6) because I didn’t have the same word count goal for them as I do now. So if you have any ideas for scenes that would fit into those (or future scenes) I would love to hear them. So far I have…

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@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty

Okay, here’s the next chapter. Any critiques/thoughts would be appreciated.

Chapter 2

It was quiet. Extraordinarily quiet. The clock did not tick on Elina’s wall, the alarm on her phone did not blare, and her siblings did not come to wake her up. The only noise came from Elina h…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Your welcome, and that would be so cool, it would add even more depth to Huntress and that point in the story.

(why do I write weirdly eloquent things like that? lol)

XD

@jonas

Thaliu. I liked the feel together.

@anyone This is long, sorry

Liko

At 6:00 am, while the school halls were still mostly quiet and empty, Liko arrived at work, holding a bucket in one hand. The contents of the bucket sloshed and jiggled at his side as he made his way to the supply closet. After setting the bucket down, he unlocked the closet door.

First thing’s first: clean the…[Read more]

@jonas

That’s cool! Lol it’s funny cuz I was just thinking that a painting magic system would go good with one of my worlds. It’s not even the first time this has happened XD

@jonas

My favorites are Chromancy, Spectrachromy, and Prismaturgy. I think Chromamancy has too many syllables.

Also I’m really intrigued by the idea of a color based magic system, if that’s what this is. It sounds cool.

@theducktator

If you want, I have a character in the school that you can have your characters meet. I haven’t written anything for him yet but I will in a bit.

Dante

“Banned for life! Ya got that? Show your face around here again and I’m calling the cops!”

Dante Tucker found himself being forcefully thrown out of a shop at seven in the morning and into the street. A poorly trimmed bush by the sidewalk broke his fall.

“… One-eyed freak.”

The front door slammed behind him.

Dante picked himself u…[Read more]

@jonas

I think I like Spectrachromy/lurgy the best. I also like Chromamancy.