Kingdom Pen | Precious Y | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/precious-y/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Precious Y. Fri, 24 Apr 2026 06:25:40 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 070a8503f67ffed842822ef724161adf Elanor started the topic How do I make a non-cliche escape scene? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-i-make-a-non-cliche-escape-scene/ Sun, 21 Nov 2021 16:28:43 -0500 So a person escapes the bad guys. This is a characteristic of most every book I’ve read. I’m writing a prison escape in my current WIP and am wondering how to make it something that’s not just the same old thing.

Any tips and or advice would be gladly appreciated.

I’ll tag a bunch of people.

@kathleenramm @joy-caroline@elanor @abigail-m @precio…[Read more]

]]> 8618ec6f8150b8c753a4f42d86c57cd9 Faith Q. started the topic When is it okay to defy the government? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-is-it-okay-to-defy-the-government/ Sat, 20 Nov 2021 05:52:13 -0500 Okay, y’all, I’ve got a dilemma on my hands.

To give you a bit of background information, my main character (Emeric Dertok) has recently come back into society after eight years of living the life of a hermit. He’s working for the King (Jornan), who charged him with the task of tracking down spies trying to sabotage the government. But as enters…[Read more]

]]> 7ff65521cd3f9e7e4eb2ffbd780f8b11 Mary G replied to the topic The Wait is OVER! My Blog Is published! in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-wait-is-over-my-blog-is-published/#post-107412 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 05:33:26 -0500 @kathleenramm @joy-caroline@elanor@abigail-m @precious-y @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @morgan@precious-y @sparksaraabbott11@e-k-seaver@writerlexi1216 @lydia-s@nanisnook @lewilliams @relia@hallie-jean @anatra23@iluvhim18 @jenwriter17@keilah-h @nova21 @ariel-f @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @beth-darlene @buildsbygideon @daisy-torres @jodi-maile @w…[Read more]

]]> 549bc9a890cf2c110d1ffe3b55317897 ella replied to the topic dealing with overloads of stress :)) in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/dealing-with-overloads-of-stress/#post-107205 Sat, 13 Nov 2021 22:02:16 -0500 @kathleenramm

thank you for the kind words, Kathleen!  John 14 is a wonderful idea.  it’s hard to always remember that God is there, but what you said is so true.  now that i think about it, songs are the main things that come on and remind me of the truth.  “water under the bridge” is what my mom likes to say, when life is hard sometimes.  thank…[Read more]

]]> 52e4ea2f8b0be68c803f6f0c62a9d3d3 Abigail.M. replied to the topic No Need To Open This Topic in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/no-need-to-open-this-topic/page/3/#post-106972 Thu, 04 Nov 2021 07:55:29 -0400 @precious-y

Hi! I saw your post and though it is most likely too late to reply, I did not want you to think I ignored it whatsoever, sadly quite a few of my replies never appeared on the posts and unfortunately this was one of them. But I definitely thought your idea was a great one. Fun facts from your research would be an excellent writing…[Read more]

]]> e50010849da8e850c99497ad6f0aa088 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Switching Gears: I'm Writing An Allegorical Fantasy Now! in the forum Biblical Fiction https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/switching-gears-im-writing-an-allegorical-fantasy-now/ Fri, 29 Oct 2021 17:09:42 -0400 @lydia-s @elanor @libby @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h@elfwing  @gracie-j @jenwriter17 @issawriter7@trahia-the-minstrel @maryg3 @kayleigh-idea @lucy @madelyn@anatra23 @scoutfinch180 @mkfairygirl @precious-y @beth-darlene @abigail-m @seekjustice @nova21 @hallie-jean @daisy-torres @jodi-maile @devastate-lasting @e-k-seaver…[Read more]

]]> 3171b2288a5642e6de828c4814f7d6b7 Katherine replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/imagine-anthology/page/4/#post-104827 Sun, 03 Oct 2021 18:29:04 -0400 GUYYSSSS, IMAGINE IS RELEASED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃😃 *cough* Well, it technically released a couple of weeks ago. *cough cough* I’m just late at telling y’all about it. Anyway, the ebook is $0.99 and the paperback is $6.79. And here’s the link if you want to check it out:…[Read more]

]]> 400e9d406593089ffb8e44c628243f29 Elfwing started the topic Blog!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/blog/ Sat, 18 Sep 2021 05:06:16 -0400 hi peoples!! I made a website and blog, it was only done today, so there’s very little on it right now, but I wanna put it out there because I have big plans!

For subscribers, there’ll be sneak peeks of my books, which I am looking to publish soon, and more!

http://www.elfwingsadventures.com

@kathleenramm @elanor @abigail-m @precious-y @not-so-secret-s…[Read more]

]]> 43871c11cdd3e69ae59ec80734139fc7 Elfwing started the topic character relationship, input please!! in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-relationship-input-please/ Fri, 10 Sep 2021 20:14:06 -0400 @daisy-torres @kathleenramm @devastate-lasting @gracie-j @precious-y @keilah-h @anyone-else-you-want-to-tag

ok, so I have one character who is more than a little insecure and definitely a doormat at the beginning of the story… she struggles with anything athletic, which sucks for her since she’s in a military training school. She has a best…[Read more]

]]> 7015779c335ffc18a183cce319c075cf Elfwing started the topic Reading in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/reading/ Tue, 07 Sep 2021 03:11:54 -0400 ok, I want to ask this very random question…

I am odd in the fact that I can take a book that bores my friends to death because it’s too longwinded or not well executed in writing, and still enjoy it because I can fill in the problems?
This is great for enjoying a book, but it also can cause problems because now when I read anything, I fill in…[Read more]

]]> baf05860d6fb583d069811901bbcb519 Ribbonash replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/3/#post-103886 Fri, 27 Aug 2021 08:30:09 -0400 @precious-y

No worries! I enjoyed reading your answer to the last question! You are so right about that. 🙂 Book genres is such an interesting topic, hey!

Ohh, literary fiction? That’s awesome! I’m excited for these stories!

]]> 2ca85d23a77e5d7b8cbe2340e6a7d48f Lin replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/imagine-anthology/#post-103805 Wed, 25 Aug 2021 15:45:12 -0400 @precious-y I’m looking forward to it! Hope you enjoy!

]]> e84b1f5ffa6f76244e05c50c2678bddf Katherine replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/imagine-anthology/#post-103790 Tue, 24 Aug 2021 23:34:03 -0400 @morgan @precious-y @sparksaraabbott11 @elfwing @kathleenramm @maryg3 @e-k-seaver @writerlexi1216 @lydia-s @nanisnook @lewilliams @relia @hallie-jean @anatra23 @iluvhim18 @jenwriter17 @keilah-h @nova21 @ariel-f @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @beth-darlene @buildsbygideon @daisy-torres @jodi-malie @when-i-see-the-kingdom @akbaer @zatara @elanor @see…[Read more]

]]> 2dffd6871ca57cad862079b56f74e4f2 Katherine replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/3/#post-103783 Tue, 24 Aug 2021 22:49:37 -0400 @precious-y (I’m so sorry for the late reply.)

Oooh, awesome!!!!!! I haven’t read that book, but I’m sure it’s really good!!!!! That’s cool that you watch Nigerian Christian movies!!!!! 🙂 Aah, COOL!!! One of my favorite classic adaption movies is the 2019 Little Women.

You’re welcome!!! 😉 *gasp* You did?!?!?!😀 Aah, I’m SO EXCITED…[Read more]

]]> 087fbf9c0e2244baecdb9b35ef16d92b Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/reunite-first-kiss/page/2/#post-103678 Fri, 20 Aug 2021 15:52:01 -0400 @keilah-h

hehe yes, and yes, Alinna has inherited them.

@precious-y Aw I’m so glad you like it!!!

Um… well he’s been away across the country and it’s not revealed til later in the story where exactly he’s been. Needless to say, he’s been pretty beaten up several times and is glad to be back. XD

]]> 3aebc3f7a828ae080576671ca67feecf Ribbonash replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/3/#post-103443 Sat, 14 Aug 2021 11:47:00 -0400 @precious-y

*stumbles into the room* *notices new person* Oh, hey! I’m Ribbon Ash! Or Miranda. I have two names haha and I love them both, but I digress. Welcome fellow writer and reader!

I would say I’m a fantasy and dystopian writer, but honestly considering the sort of ideas I get these days I think it’s best to say I’m a multi-genre writer.…[Read more]

]]> 4d0a375783b29c2669147b6f67511e90 Elfwing started the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/beta-readers-needed/ Mon, 09 Aug 2021 16:59:33 -0400 Hi y’all!! so, I’m looking for beta readers, as betrayed by the title.

I’m not sure if you like fantasy or not, but if you do then this is a good opportunity for it!! I do not have a strict dead-line, but I’d love some feedback by the end of the year to see if I need to make any major changes…

I’m gonna tag some people, and since I don’t know…[Read more]

]]> 3740f023562b1e76a944869c178575a1 Elfwing posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/103789/#acomment-104612 Mon, 09 Aug 2021 15:10:25 -0400 @precious-y wow, those look interesting and like they’re totally worth doing!
I’ll tag some people for you who might be able to help more since I can’t remember many tags right now XD
@joy-caroline @daisy-torres @gracie-j @abigail-m @sparksaraabbott11 @writerlexi1216

In reply to - Precious Y posted an update Hello everyone! I’m currently in the researching stage of my sci-fi/alternate history novel. It’s tentative title is The Unchosen Ones and I plan for this to be a series by God’s grace. […] ]]> 8793605afe5d512d8d6ad1e5aad771e2 Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/reunite-first-kiss/#post-103189 Thu, 05 Aug 2021 22:07:24 -0400 @gracie-j @precious-y sorry! It’s pretty long lol

]]> 0d6174cec0ed8f959d2a4ae67056a83c Lin replied to the topic Dramatic Scenes in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/dramatic-scenes/page/4/#post-103169 Thu, 05 Aug 2021 01:21:39 -0400 @precious-y I would say my villain is a central character, though right now I have the POVs of the villain, the hero, and the villain’s friend. There’s a lot more characters than I anticipated, ha… Maybe this will be longer.

Hmm….villain character development… Kingdom Pen has a lot of great articles on them! Since your characters are…[Read more]

]]> 9ae91419efe86251a57e3191d2096197 Elfwing started the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/reunite-first-kiss/ Thu, 05 Aug 2021 01:10:27 -0400 @gracie-j @precious-y @abigail-m @daisy-torres @other-people-who-want-to-add-their-two-cents

welllll here’s a kiss scene I did; it’s not meant to be too long, since they’re teenagers and you know *cough * the whole family is watching. Anyways, these two have been separated for months and thought the other was dead; I wanna know what you guys…[Read more]

]]> 98524bf06319ce599df85c49a3f93185 Elfwing replied to the topic Dramatic Scenes in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/dramatic-scenes/page/4/#post-103165 Thu, 05 Aug 2021 00:51:44 -0400 @precious-y first of all, can I say I love your name? idk if Precious is your real name or a pen name but I love it!! I totally wanna call a character that at some point… i love looking for cool and unique names

I’m so glad that the excerpt showed that about Kaunon; he’s a brave kid, but the one with the foot-shaped mouth so to speak, and a bit…[Read more]

]]> 79f6a8773eec0c2e45443c3b6bc19b80 Elfwing replied to the topic Dramatic Scenes in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/dramatic-scenes/page/3/#post-103086 Tue, 03 Aug 2021 11:37:15 -0400 @precious-y

thanks! And here’s more!

Kaunon stared in horror as Alinna was flung down into the water. He was now surrounded by dragons; Death Rams, but these were average size, even if they were as nasty as their alpha.

Kaunon tried to get to Alinna, but every time he reached the dragon taunting her it would snarl and throw her to a…

[Read more]

]]> a95e2c125ac852d86baa46b313fdeb46 Lin replied to the topic Dramatic Scenes in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/dramatic-scenes/page/3/#post-103085 Tue, 03 Aug 2021 11:22:45 -0400 @precious-y Thank you! My story is about a villain who has a conscience, so it’s been quite interesting to write.

]]> 0889ec38de50a7bad8e66afeb65f58d7 Elfwing replied to the topic Dramatic Scenes in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/dramatic-scenes/page/3/#post-103076 Tue, 03 Aug 2021 02:07:21 -0400 @precious-y thank you so much!! I’ll post the rest of that one tomorrow if you’d like to read it! 🙂

]]> f0adb7c47dc264607c4ce02bc0c7a61b Lydia S. replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/3/#post-102661 Tue, 27 Jul 2021 23:09:30 -0400 @precious-y

Agh, I am very late… *facepalm* But welcome to the KP forum, Precious!

Those are awesome genres! I have yet to dig deeply into sci-fi, but I’d love to do that someday. Contemporary is really fun to write. 😀

I’m guessing most of my favorite questions have already been asked, so I guess I’ll just ask my absolute favorite. 😉

Who…[Read more]

]]> 58953c594fd4812ce0ff698a4e14d1de Anatra replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/3/#post-102585 Sun, 25 Jul 2021 01:47:10 -0400 @precious-y

If you want reading suggestions, I know plenty of good books. Into whimsical humor? Percy Jackson and the Olympians. Historical growth and women’s rights? Little Women. (I don’t really know what you’re interested in other than fiction and historical, so forgive any blubbering on my part.)

Maybe you’d like Crown of Feathers by Nicki…[Read more]

]]> 6c6e2a423d1462ded1c1749438787d3e Sara Ann {Spark} replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/3/#post-102548 Sat, 24 Jul 2021 15:47:13 -0400 @precious-y sound like good books! i’ve never read Emma but i love the movie! {2009, that’s the only one that i’ll watch and i love it. *heart eyes* i actually watched it again last night. we had a surprise tea party/movie night for my 21 year old sisters b-day.} <3

um, maybe? it might have been tho she doesn’t have “superhero” abilities. she’s…[Read more]

]]> a2618330b0a0603dbc8db360b9733e07 Katherine replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/2/#post-102458 Thu, 22 Jul 2021 02:29:35 -0400 @precious-y Hi, Precious!!!!!! 😀 Welcome to the Kingdom!!!!!!

I’m Katherine. And I love reading and writing in a variety of genres. What’s your favorite book? What’s your favorite movie?

Oh, and I noticed you asked for sci-fi recommendations. Have you heard of Nova by Chuck Black? I haven’t read it yet, but my sister said it was an awesome…[Read more]

]]> a76710e10da5ca39656747c29b390eaa imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/2/#post-102449 Wed, 21 Jul 2021 19:51:47 -0400 @precious-y

Hi Precious!  I’m Lily!  It’s so nice to meet you.  I hope you enjoy you’re time here on the KP Forum.

🙂

]]> d3be5992242c34ab550f70ef8fafa505 Lin replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/2/#post-102441 Wed, 21 Jul 2021 16:53:58 -0400 @precious-y Hi, welcome! Nice to meet you!

]]> d9365fce57005177eeda9152d22d369d Morgan replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/2/#post-102433 Wed, 21 Jul 2021 15:54:31 -0400 @precious-y

Hi and welcome!!!

First, some questions:

1) Do you have any pets?

2) What is your favorite animal?

3) What is your absolute favorite thing to do in your spare time?

Second, it is so nice to meet you!

Third, some things about me. My favorite genre both to read and to write is fantasy fiction but I enjoy almost any genre. I enjoy…[Read more]

]]> e0cc4d3aa4a2c707e2d322f671c37a34 Sara Ann {Spark} replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/page/2/#post-102427 Wed, 21 Jul 2021 12:36:31 -0400 @precious-y welcome! i’m so glad you joined! *hands you a mini fruit pizza* try this and tell me what you think. <3

here are some random questions:

whats books have you been reading?

have you read/heard of keeper of the lost cities?

how old are you?

do you like to sing?

what songs/singers/bands would you say you enjoy most?

welcome…[Read more]

]]> 3de18d416f89110d96090f3cce485a5d Anatra replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/#post-102416 Wed, 21 Jul 2021 01:18:13 -0400 @precious-y

Hullo! Welcome! I’m Anatra, and I love writing fantasy and reading nearly everything fiction.

Random question, have you heard of or seen the Marvel Cinematic Universe? If you have, more randomly, which Spider-Man is your favorite? Tom Holland, Andrew Garfield, or Toby Maguire?

Your WIP sounds interesting, and I can’t wait to hear…[Read more]

]]> 0686df18af0b0cf33f6fc33c33aef242 Kathleen replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/#post-102411 Wed, 21 Jul 2021 00:33:16 -0400 @precious-y

Hi! Welcome to KP! It’s awesome to meet you!

Sci-fi is such a cool genre to write in! I haven’t written a full novel in the genre, but what I have written was really fun to write.

Do you have a favorite sci-fi novel?

Also do you have any favorite fictional characters?

Again, it’s great to meet you! See ya around!

]]> 6ce2e2a83e445b533f4b10a904ebf4df ella replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/#post-102405 Tue, 20 Jul 2021 22:16:55 -0400 @precious-y

Your WIP sounds awesome!  I’d totally read that.  (Especially bc of the 1950s thing… 😋)

Bullet journaling is so fun!  This is kinda related, but bc I got stiches in my foot and now have to sit all day (blech) I rediscovered coloring!  Mandalas and patterns… SO fun!

Oh no, that crawfish story is totally a horror story!!!  I’m so…[Read more]

]]> 2a323f4ada8d8787c31b0800f7e274fe Elfwing replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/#post-102399 Tue, 20 Jul 2021 20:55:39 -0400 @precious-y

ah ok!! Coolio! I admit mine is weird and probably will get stranger still because the characters are not doing what they’re told and now are separated from each other. It’s called Star Full of Skies

no it doesn’t make you an outcast; it does take a certain frame of mind to sit and read it. I just happen to be on the mindset a lot b…[Read more]

]]> d3bddf0ad3001f8e725e64e490e3538c Ariel replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/#post-102391 Tue, 20 Jul 2021 20:02:19 -0400 @precious-y

Hey Precious, welcome to KP! Who doesn’t love sci-fi? Can I ask you a few questions?

1. How long have you been writing?

2. What’s your favorite flavor of ice cream?

3. Are you homeschooled or public schooled?

4. Have you read Jenna Terese’s Ignite?

It’s great to have you here!

]]> 7284be3af863321d5a6928f45104190e ella replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/#post-102354 Tue, 20 Jul 2021 16:00:13 -0400 @precious-y

Hey, I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!  I love sci-fi and alt. history!  I’m kind of writing an alt. hist. right now.  My WIP is from the perspective of four different characters and is based off different cultures.

So, now to questions:

What is your WIP about?

What do you like to do in your free time?

Do you have any pe…[Read more]

]]> bb5268d2aface7aa9a1ab289989fdabe Elfwing replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/#post-102345 Tue, 20 Jul 2021 11:25:25 -0400 @Precious-y

Hi!! Welcome!! I’m only writing my first attempt at a Sci fi novel, but I also like sci fi!! Alternate history sounds really cool!

Do you like Lord of the Rings?

And what is your favorite animal?

Now *cracks knuckles * I have some fates to plot and breakfast to eat, so ta ta for now! 🙂

]]> 800c46293d988b9459ac8724ea03b373 Daisy Torres replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/#post-102343 Tue, 20 Jul 2021 03:42:49 -0400 @Precious-y Hi!! Nice to meet you!!

I am also a sci-fi writer! I just published my first sci-fi on Amazon Kindle this last week actually! (It’s called The Art of Deception if you ever wanna take a peek 😉

*offers you some german chocolate cake* If you ever want a book cover made, or a character drawn, feel free to ask! (I drew my pfp)

Also,…[Read more]

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