@power
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Faith Q. started the topic Calling all storytellers… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
Okay, y’all, so I recently finished my YA fantasy novel.
*cues the high-pitched screams*
But my next project is a middle-grade novel featuring a 12-year-old MC who gets herself into all sorts of scrapes.
The problem is, I’m not naturally a humorous writer. It’s something I’m trying to work on in this story, true, but a very not funny writer…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@everyone-because-there-are-way-too-many-people-to-tag
*Falls from ceiling, leaving hole in roof. Lands on cushioned couch*
IM GOOD. And I’ll fix that giant hole later …..maybe….XD
HELLO EVERYBODY!! How’s it going? I’ve been working on my Project Garden first draft. OH and I found this awesome program called CampfireWrite if anyone wants to…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@devastate-lasting @annabelle @karissa-chmil @power @autumn-rebecca @lavenderbookling @anyone else who joins this thread:
I’ve recently started rewriting my second book. Here’s an excerpt from what I’ve just wrote today:
Salvárdé stood next to Tarûkon as Mérar haggled with the stable owner over the price of such a long-term board. The dark-skin…[Read more]
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Karissa Chmil replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@annabelle Congratulations on that spotlight! Looks great!
@power Goodness, that accent. XD Have a pirate character in any WIP
@lavenderbookling Heheh, join the club as far as wandering-around-KingdomPen goes. XP
Past few days have been anything but normal, since the aforementioned Young Writer’s Workshop just had a tragedy, so, especially as a…[Read more]
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Autumn Rebecca replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@power Remind me not to deserve the plank…
@annabelle That’s all super awesome! I’m really happy that I joined YWW as well. It’s been really useful. 🙂
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Lin replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@annabelle Yeah, you can talk about anything!
Wow, congratulations on your author spotlight! It looks quite interesting!
As someone who is also juggling several projects, I relate. Which one is your favorite story to work on right now?
Ah, I’ve always gotten emails from YWW, but never could bring myself to join. But I’m planning on taking some…[Read more]
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Lin started the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
Hello, one and all! For those of you who are newer, we used to have some topics called “Writer’s Corner” or something like that, but I’m far too lazy to search for the previous ones or consult how many of these we have been through, so we can just start a new one.
This thread is just a place for off-topic chats, where we can talk about our day or…[Read more]
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Karissa Chmil replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@power o.O That’s intense. But also awesome.
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Author Conservatory in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 years, 5 months ago
@autmn-rebecca @sparrowhawke @faith-q @keilah-h @power @jasmine-godby @karissa-chmil @anyone-else-on-this-thread-I-forgot
I have made the decision and joined Author Conservatory. My start date is in June.😊
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 5 months ago
Lovely poem!!! It looks like @thelobsterlover and @power did a phenomenal job explaining everything, so there’s not much for me to say, other than great job! 😀
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TheLobsterLover replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy
I read your poem. It’s amazing (better than I could do anyways). I love the use of the repetitive first verses; it sets up such a good, vaguely ominous tone and feels very intentional. I was going to point out some problems with the verses, but it seems @power beat me to it (and also said it a lot better). The first stanza is great…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Developing A New Story Idea! (Help? XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@kathleenramm @koshka @keilah-h @elanor @jodi-maile @scripter-of-kingdoms@morgan @elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @avacoulter @faith-q @power @devastate-lasting @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @abigail-m@autumn-rebecca  @e-k-seaver @daisy-torres @gracie-j @libby @kayleigh-idea @r-m-archer @maryg3 @scoutfinch180 @writerlexi1216…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 5 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 5 months ago
tho I am a tad confused what u meant by losing a line at the end??
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 5 months ago
Whoa….
Ok so I honestly….don’t rlly get any of that but when you said everything evened out except a few things actual technical poem wise, I’m like….
What…? I…didn’t even try honestly but that makes me so happy! THANK YOU SO MUCH BECAUSE NOW I’M GOING TO GO AND MAKE IT PURPOSEFULLY RIGHT 😂 cuz it pretty much already is!
ahhh…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 6 months ago
OK SO! I know where I’m posting this might be A BIT WEIRD BUT HEAR ME OUT!!!!
So as of rn my second book in fantasy series, (the second book is Project DM) has a looong poem in it. I have just gone back and revised the poem and when I finished I was kinda blown away ngl, and I really like it so I wanted to share it with y’all! So this is kinda a…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel started the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 6 months ago
Eeek! I’m so excited! After ages, and my website being put up on the 31st of January, it’s finally fully functional (except for the privacy policy, I’m still working on that cause I’m bad at formal language😅) .
I’m so thrilled to share this with you guys!
My website URL is Hadassah.nz !
I hope you’ll enjoy the content on it! If any of you want…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Who has impacted your writing the most? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 6 months ago
That’s really cool!
Of course, putting you into the world to pretty cool, but letting you naturally fall into stories in your own way instead of forcing you is also really cool.
Was there a particular audiobook that you found that made you interested in listening to more?
All of your inspirations from friends to…[Read more]
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TheLobsterLover posted an update 4 years, 6 months ago
@power Hi! I actually finished your request a few days ago but I can’t send it for the life of me! Everytime I click submit my comment simply doesn’t show up. This might be a problem…
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Anatra replied to the topic Something Really Bad Happened guys. (not clickbait) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 years, 6 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassin
Brilliant first chapter(and second, I suppose). Riveting. Fast-paced, easily retainable, and entertaining(but plz don’t let it get to your head).
Sheesh, nine-year-olds those days, very desensitized.
I wanna agree with @power on the running sentences, though I think the chapters flowed pretty well together. Not…[Read more]
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@thelobsterlover No problem. You can sent it to me through my writing email account if you want to.
powerofthemongoose@gmail.com