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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Rinzler and Feather
Rinzler eyed the cat-like creature in front of him. Great, he thought. Another creature to follow us around.
The cat yakked on and on, finally coming to a stop. “…I don’t even know your names. Okay, I’ll shut up now.” he finished.
Feather’s apparent new friend—Hesh—introduced them all before Rinzler coul…[Read more]
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
(Power, is Kent a leopard?)
Hesh
Hesh stepped back as a lithe form leaped, roaring, from the depthless darkness. “Light!” the creature… yelled? “Wonderful light!” The creature looked like a large, spotted cat, but spoke with the voice of a human. This day was only getting more bizarre.
Hesh eyed the cat warily, not sure whet…[Read more]
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Faith Q. started the topic Y'all help me storm my brain!!!! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 2 months ago
Okay, y’all, I need a brainstorming partner… or two… or as many as I can find, haha…
It’ll actually be for two separate projects. One is a middle-grade contemporary novel, and the other is a YA fantasy. If you’re up for helping me brainstorm, either (or both!) need work, so anyone who can, pretty much? I’ll give the tags here, and then put…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Scars, a poem in the forum Poetry 4 years, 2 months ago
Indeed! Many thanks. See you around 🙂
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Scars, a poem in the forum Poetry 4 years, 2 months ago
@power Whoa, that poem was AMAZING and really touching!! I loved it! THANK YOU for sharing it with us!! It reminded me of the lyrics from TobyMac’s song Scars. “It doesn’t matter who you are, this world goin’ leave some battle scars.”
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
OH COOL!! I’ll just have them have to find each other!! HAHAHA I AL DIABOLICAL!!!
HAHAHAHAHA SAMMMMEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (you should hear me rant about my villains XD)
she’s sweet and sensitive and gentle, but her flaw is actually shoving down her personality due to a mistake she made as a child (which left her with the scar) so she…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
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Elanor replied to the topic Scars, a poem in the forum Poetry 4 years, 2 months ago
Of course 😜
Haha. Love it!
Thanks for the poetry swap it’s been fun! Wait I’m supposed to send one more then we’re even.
Hmmm let’s see…
Dancing Lights
The great Northern Lights
Are soaring in the heights.
Like many dancing
Their hues are flashing.
Sweeping, swirling, running,
Changing with each second passing.
With each seco…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Scars, a poem in the forum Poetry 4 years, 2 months ago
@power Love it!! It’s so mystrious and imagination-provoking… *sighs*
I’m glad you liked it!
Okay and here’s another (I suppose we could go on for a long time. YOu don’t know what you signed up for 😉)
Waves
There’s a mystery in the ocean’s tide.
As it floats so deep, so far, so wide
And stirs something deep inside.
Something so deep it…[Read more]
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Unsung replied to the topic I volunteer as tribute! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 2 months ago
@denali-christianson, @power, Okay, I don’t mean to be rude, but I just had to mention the katana! I absolutely love the katana, and it is my very favorite blade! XD Sorry, just had to say that.
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic I volunteer as tribute! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 2 months ago
@unsung Lol I suppose you should!!! XD Thank you!!! 😀
@power may your villains fear you, and your MC’s shrink back at your- okay now I’ll stop with the writers’ edition brutally bad beginning (bummer) XD. Nice alliteration by the way. Appreciate the immediate reference to battle and blood and all things medieval.
YES A FELLOW MEDIEVAL WEAPON…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Scars, a poem in the forum Poetry 4 years, 3 months ago
Okay I’ll try again. 😆 (It’s been cantankerous and hungry lately it seems lol)
The poem about the baboons sounds funny. I like the balloon one.
Heres one of my favourites of my recent ones. I was minding my own business buisily studying my Physics lesson when this came to mind. It’s doesn’t have any particular meter or rhyme so a bit odd…[Read more]
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Madelyn started the topic How Do You Turn a Spark Into a Blaze? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 3 months ago
If you clicked on this topic because of the interesting title, I feel obliged to tell you first off that this is not about the practice of fire starting 🔥
Sorry to disappoint you, but, please, stick around!! 😉
Today I have a simple question for y’all:
How do you go from an semi-fleshed-out idea to a real plot? How do you build a bridge from a s…[Read more] -
Elanor replied to the topic Scars, a poem in the forum Poetry 4 years, 3 months ago
It looks like it ate my reply when I sent it? Did it?
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Elanor replied to the topic Scars, a poem in the forum Poetry 4 years, 3 months ago
Haha! Sounds like a fun poem baboons bickering in a tree. lol
Oh, I like it!
Here’s another one I wrote. This was a random thought moment after a Physics lesson. It doesn’t exactly rhyme and is a sort of weird pattern. With lots of alliteration, but I like it lol
The Least are Largest
Just small things we are
We are the smallest of…[Read more]
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Faith Q. started the topic Me idea in the forum Plotting 4 years, 3 months ago
Okay, so last night I got this amazing idea. At least I think it sounds amazing. But my problem is, it also sounds a bit cliche.
The problem is, I don’t get out much. Honestly, I’m pretty picky about what I read, so modern secular works are very rarely added to the list, and I am pretty clueless about what’s actually on the shelves. I know I…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Scars, a poem in the forum Poetry 4 years, 3 months ago
A desk job has never seemed more enticing. I guess my dream of becoming a advertising street sign holder will have to die. Its a so sad, but I must do it for the arts…
But in any sense, thanks for the tips! I will definitely be using them.
As for your question about what rhymes with orange, it’s Sporange. An uncommon, but very real…[Read more]
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Autumn Rebecca started the topic The Hope That Remains Despite Illnesses in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 3 months ago
Hola! I need a little help with this poem. I want to post it on my blog, but I want to make sure that it is good enough. Do the rhymes keep a good rhythm? Does it pull on the emotions? Any thoughts? Is it worth posting or should I trash it and try again?
8) Lord, You are removing my chains,
10) So why does illness kill my hope to fly?
6) Am I…
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Elanor replied to the topic Scars, a poem in the forum Poetry 4 years, 3 months ago
😏 I suppose I could share a couple… I write about pretty much anything. I’ve written poems about the seasons, rain, time, some Bible passages, and many many others. I’ve actually published a couple here on KP. I also write in many different forms of verse, rhyme, etc. So I wouldn’t say I have a characteristic rhythm to write in. lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic What Kind of Writing do You Excel at? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
I write fanfiction, mostly. I’m not the best with original plots, but I make original characters and sidestory fanfics to go with them like crazy. My brother is better at creating villain groups, cool weapons, and that sort of thing than I am. But I like writing little picture books (5 published already), and I’ve done a few essays.
Also,…[Read more]
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