@power
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Power replied to the topic Into His Marvelous Light in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Please forgive me if I sounded facetious, over bold, or nosey. Perhaps I should have introduction myself in more detail. I am also an Apostolic Pentecostal. It’s neat to know that I am not the only one on here (besides my sisters).
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Power replied to the topic Into His Marvelous Light in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
The strict definition of a baptist is a member of a Protestant Christian denomination advocating baptism only of adult believers (by this it means someone who is conscious, so no babies) by total immersion. So actually you are Oneness and Baptist in baptism. 😉 Also thanks for the verses!
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Power replied to the topic Into His Marvelous Light in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
This has been an interesting read. @godlyfantasy12 I enjoyed the part (section 2 of the study I believe?) about the Samaritans not receiving the Holy Ghost until Peter came. It was a nice reminder. @joy-caroline It was neat to hear about Seventh-Day Adventists. I don’t really know a lot about other denominations so it’s kinda cool to learn about…[Read more]
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Power started the topic The Assassination of Queen Miranda Kocham Grace Tarcza in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Do you ever get an idea and just write done the first chapter or prologue? This is where the story below comes from. Brief warning, it doesn’t end happily.
PrologueThe target was directly in the center of her sights. The X hovered on the young Queen’s head. All Jewel had to do now was squeeze the trigger, and her last mission would be over.…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Three Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
I’m not sure which hit the floor first, my head or my knees, but I was pretty sure my knee hurt the worse. This was probably due to the fact that they went through the slightly rotten kitchen floor they smashed into.
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Power replied to the topic Maps (creative title, I know) in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 2 months ago
It takes a lot of work (I’ve spent probably more than 10 hours and am still not finished). I recommend that you draw out the general outline of your map (Mountains, Lands, Water, ect. but not woods) with pencils. Then scan it into a computer and work on the finer details (I use Paint 3D since I like being able to get down to the individual pixel).…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic 1st Chapter Critique for The Inventor’s Daughter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
Just set up another Gmail account, and use it when you don’t people knowing your information. It will ask for your birthday and name, but just don’t put in you real birthday date and use an alias. It can come in handy when a store asks for your email, but you don’t want them flooding your inbox with advertisements.
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Power replied to the topic 1st Chapter Critique for The Inventor’s Daughter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
@keilah-h and @devastate-lasting, y’all could make a junker gmail account and use that for any transferral of stories.
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Power replied to the topic 1st Chapter Critique for The Inventor’s Daughter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
It may be to late, but if not I would like to read your chapter. powerofthemongoose@gmail.com
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Power replied to the topic A Rather Belated Introduction in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
A rather belated response, to a rather belated introduction. (4 days… Perhaps not belated enough. Maybe I should wait a little longer to post this post, so it has more belatedness??) Greetings! It’s nice to meet another Nielsen fan! I’m Power, but you can just call me Power! Or the Magnificent Mangy Marooned Mud Mouse if you feel the need to.…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Just a Story Idea in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
You have a group of agents (not sure which branch, possibly FIGs) they are looking into a company (Hurricane, Tornado, or something like that.) that’s is working for Vortex. They infiltrate the business, but get caught. In the end they eradicate the threat.
I also had some thoughts about put a little kid in the story. He was given the device that…[Read more]
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Power started the topic Just a Story Idea in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
An idea popped into my head a while ago, so I decided to write the climax of the story.
“I am unstoppable!” The crazed man gestured to the army of robots behind him then let out an insane cackle. “The world will bow to James Alexander Herring . I’ll kill those who oppose me, and keep the rest as pets and slaves.”
Addison looked over at Kirk. How…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Poems by Power in the forum Poetry 3 years, 3 months ago
A Friendly Reminder to Wear a Coat
the Blustery wind
Chills the bones
Freezes the nose
turns toes Stone
Rips off the ears
makes cheeks Glow
Grips the back
Blinding snow
the arctic Blast
Cools the head
Don’t stay out
or you’ll be Dead!
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Power started the topic in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
So here’s just some stuff on the Miska Chronicles
Prologue
Back, and forth, back, and forth paced the lion. His long tail twitched ever so slightly. Lord Rawson’s golden mane kept on shrouding in darkness the papers his accomplice was reading. But this did not bother the leopard. He was used to the darkness.
There was a knock on the thick cedar…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Hey guys! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
I’m working on a series called the Miska Chronicles.
Sure, I’ll create a post called the Miska Chronicles, and put some stuff on there so I don’t blow this page up.
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Power replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 3 years, 3 months ago
Another amazing book series. They are a little weird, but ring true. I was a little wary of reading them because of their covers and some of the things in them, but once I finally did peak under the first books cover, the vortex sucked me in, and now I love the series.
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Power replied to the topic Hey guys! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
Yes, most of the time.
Same here. I plan out stories, but find it hard to put on paper. I make maps and have made a massive family tree. 😆
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Power replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 3 years, 3 months ago
It may sound childish, but it pretty amazing, well written. The Green Embers series in short is about rabbits with sword trying to reconquer their land from wolves and birds of prey . The first book is kinda slow in the middle, but besides that, they’re one of the best series I’ve ever read. For me it’s up there with the Wingfeather Saga and the…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 3 years, 3 months ago
The one before this one. (I cleaned it up and didn’t save the original copy.)
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Power replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 3 years, 3 months ago
Fan art, FUN!!!
This is a human version of Weezer, from the Green Embers series, that I drew then put through a face changing app.
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