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Hi, everyone! I like the Wingfeather Saga, although it is one of those books I have to find the lessons in or I can’t get out of it/enjoy it.

I also love the ending: the power behind it is mind blowing. There is no doubt in my mind that Janner comes back, (I mean, it’s fiction. The ending is as you like it. [Okay, I know that’s an annoying way to…[Read more]

@elfwing

I’m glad to hear that!

@abigail-m

Привет! I am commenting on here as it wouldn’t let me reply to you on the activity-feed-thing.

My brother’s writing is amazing (Don’t Tell him I said that)!

Thank you! I love my wolves and themes too. (Otherwise why would I like talking about them so much?)

My favorite theme to write? Ooo, I suppose that ‘ matter what you’ve done,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome ;). I usually forget my character’s misbelief, so…

@trahia-the-minstrel

I have never seen it, and (is this bad?) I honestly don’t want to. I have heard it is amazing, again from a trusted source. I just don’t watch much of anything (a bit too much of a book person with a vivid imagination and  accidental history snob/nerd).

Thank you so much! Yeah, I see. In my mind’s eye I see him standing there a moment perplexed while all the other Novak warriors chase the kids… But I didn’t make that very clear did I? 😉 I’ll work on that!
Thank you again!(and yeah, a lot of my ideas center around emotion)
@anatra23

I haven’t seen it, but I’ve heard of it from a very trusted source that is was fantabulous.

@trahia-the-minstrel

@e-k-seaver

I have no idea what Sprint means… We have a kids thing at our church tonight that I’m working, but I may be able to participate.

What’s crazy is after I posted I kinda figured out Kai’s would be fear of failing lol! But all these ideas for Ardan are great!!! Thx yall!!

@anatra23 WOW I LOVE THIS thank u!

@koshka oh yes the need, gotta remember that lol! Thx for reminding me lol

@koshka

Ok, yeah! Thanks, that probably works better, and might help limit the reader to the protagonist’s view point. Anything else? 🙂

@elishavet-pidyon

*Smiles at the names*
I love the ending! I may change ‘Milla was curled up on the ground,’ to ‘I could just see Milla curled up on the ground,’ or something like that. But then again, I don’t know.

Feel free to tag as you like! Sorry, I have a habit of forgetting half I meant to say till after I’v posted something!

@koshka, @anatra23, @power, @anyone

Because you might like to read it and help revise.

@godlyfantasy12

Here are a few ideas;

Fear: messing up (past fixing), of becoming something terrible, to be nothing, to be something.

Misbelief: that his desire is wrong, that if he disappoints his father he will no longer be loved, that all these standards are just to keep him from fun.

Do you have a separate need as well, or are you using…[Read more]

Sorry, I forgot to tag you.

@godlyfantasy

So, I don’t personally know your characters, but from life, books, and from what they did in the Bible, here are some ideas to help get those creative juices flowing.

• Fear of darkness(not the dark)
• Fear of disillusionment
• Fear of the violent man
• Fear of failing
• Fear of not measuring up
• Fear of spiders (okay, maybe not)
• Fear of…

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@gracie-j @elishavet-pidyon @koshka I could actually use some help rn lol.

I need some help with 2 things.

I’ve got my protagonist’s Desire and misbelief down but not his fear, and I’ve got of my side character’s Desire and fear down but not his misbelief

Kaithen- Protagonist

Desire: To be more then just an errand boy, to be more then one who…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, those character struggles are very good. Your story line gives that pleasurable ache deep inside by which one knows it’s good.

Amen!

Question; is it an allegory of David?