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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.
Yeah, essentially. Though N’nesha specifically hasn’t even seen that horizon, it’s probably been described to her before.
There’s a planet in Star Wars calle…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)
More or less. It’s not really an asteroid, but it is a field of planetoids. I’ve talked about Omialia many times before, but it’s essentially a…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22
N’nesha
Uvah had Bucky sit, working on his wound. I paced back and forth.
Neshe: We need to get out of here.
Nele: Where even is “here”?
I decided to explore the room, feeling around the walls. Wood touched my fingers, and specks of light shown through the cracks. A window.
Neshe: This could be a good…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @freedomwriter76
UVAH
She walked forward in a daze as Bucky ushered them into a dim room to hide. As Uvah turned back towards the door however, her gaze caught on Bucky’s arm, illuminated for only a second as he shut the entrance. Left in darkness, she could only barely see the slice of dripping red running along his bicep, she…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter67
Here’s the last post, and I made sure there wasn’t any after that, it was around page 417:
@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22
I decided I needed to stop procrastinating and continue before I getting prodded again, sorry it’s a little short😅
N’nesha
“…Let me handle this.” I heard Bucky say. I lay, stunned……
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
and would y’all like to just get rid of our group with Uvah, N’Nesha, & Bucky, or continue it? (again, idk where we left off last 😆)
It’s been your turn actually. I can repost the last one if you want, just give me a moment to dig.
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, I don’t really mind either way. I have no idea where we left off either 😅
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@princessachronical22 @lightoverdarkness6
Liren
She vanished… The same darkness that the woman commanded earlier suddenly enveloped her, and she was gone. Namal and her companion both jumped into defensive stances, eyes darting towards all the dark corners of the hallway. I looked around helplessly with my broken arm. Kirrtes reflected my…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
So I finished Elantris. It was really good, but there’s so many things in the Cosmere that is left unsaid. Apparently there is going to be a book two and three eventually though.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
🤣🤣🤣
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Hmmm, I don’t know.
Thinking about compounding each of them, it would have very unique effects. Electrum would be funny. If you compounded that, and get a massive amount of determination, you might just start thinking yourself a god, without that really adding to your physical power in any way. Pewter alo and Gold feu would be a good combo,…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Oooh, okay, cool!
I like the concept a lot! And Immancy just has a nice ring to it.
They’re kind of just trading with themselves, but I don’t really have a full explanation done yet.
Yeah, my magic system is fairly loose right now, I’m not the best at actually having reasons for things😂
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Hahaha! 🤣I love those
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Oh, okay! That’s really interesting, and it makes sense too. Is there a certain force he is trading with? Or is it something everyone does, wherever they are?
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Ooh, I’m not sure what the sword-coin thing means but that sounds intriguing, is it part of your magic system?
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Awww, she sounds like an awesome charrie, that’s so saaad thouugh 😭
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Sure, that works great, as long as you can type that easily.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Possibly, but this still feels kind of nebulas to me, even if it has a impact on him personally.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
I’m doing what you suggested with finding consonant and vowel sounds. Do you happen to know how to write the sound that the ‘j’ in Eojold makes, phonetically? (It’s pronounced like the ‘g’ at the end of ‘garage’ or ‘sabotage.’) I can’t find any info online.
So I simply call this a French j. It’s usually notated with a j in French, or ge in…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
I think that would work yes. If he believed that they simply threw him away, then that would be something that would weigh on him heavily. However if this is to slide into the exposition you gave, that would mean he associates the Pythonos with his parents choice, which would suggest that it wasn’t their fault. This is the…[Read more]
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