Orielle2023

@awsumfaith

Thanks! He and Everly are the ones in my pfp. (Lol I just changed it, but he was in there before I changed it too. I guess I have a tendancy to use pics of him for my pfp)

@esther-c

: D

I’m curious to know what happens with Asher and Ev’s relationship! (Asher’s betrayal is my favorite arc in your book)

@godlyfantasy12

Looks cool! 😀

@esther-c

Thanks!

@kyronthearcanin

OOOO I like them all! =D

@awsumfaith

Oooo I like her! And yay for siblings. =D

Since you’re doing your protagonist I guess I’ll pick one of mine. XD
I don’t want to overload people with information so I’m just gonna copy what you shared about your character and do that about mine…

Teilo O’Muirynn *insert last adoptive last name* He is the MC, I’m 99% sure……[Read more]

@awsumfaith

Cool! I like your characters aesthetic!

Hmm… I think I’ll do Kaine because he’s my current fav.

Kaine is kinda a orphan? He’s taken care of by his sister (Everly) who is like 8 years older than him. He’s 15 at the time of my 3rd book. He’s got like a cottage-core woodsy aesthetic. His arc is mostly letting go of fear and learning…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

I’d love to hear about you characters! =D

XD I have a lot of characters of my own so I may not share all of them but I’m definitely willing to share some if you want.

@esther-c

Oh, I hope you feel better soon!! 😊

Thanks =)

Hm… the handcuffs… Well… maybe that was just me somehow forgetting he was wearing them. 🤣 Yep, that was totally me forgetting. I’ll have to fix that. 😂

XD I’ve done that before too. Like a character was wearing a hat but they were running and it was windy and somehow it magically manages…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

AWW okay so I really like both snippets

…Peter needs to have someone with him 24/7. Just…yeah. *facepalm because no one was watching him and he’s only six*

Great job! =D

@joy-calle

Oh no. XD *memories of hearing siri tell me a story*

No, I haven’t done that yet. XD But I might have to now…if only for laughter.

@godlyfantasy12

OOOO I like it! =D

I have one question though, who is the blond guy in the top left corner? WAIT WAIT WAIT is that Arthur???

@keilah-h Oooo I really like the way you did the camo!

@power I reeeeaally like his armor, and the shading as others have mentioned.

@awsumfaith OOOOO I like how clean your lines are! Arwen looks nice. ALSO THE PATTERN ONE IS AMAZING, HOW DID YOU NOT SMUDGE THAT.

@loopylin

XD what happens if you’re both authors at the same time??? XD

@freedomwriter76

No worries! =D Great job!

…does he…get a decent ending?

@esther-c

Sorry I missed this! also my thoughts may be kinda jumbled I’m sick and brain is kinda fuzzy

I like the pacing! =D

I agree with Min, you do a lot of telling and don’t show things very much. It’s not bad to tell, there is a place for it. I’m not gonna elaborate more on that since my brain isn’t working and Min already gave you an…[Read more]

@esther-c

I like this scene a lot! The action was really good!

I felt the pacing was pretty good, although it would have been nice to have some more descriptions and less statements about what they did.

The soldiers were coming ever closer. Ev ran out of the cave with Ami close on his heels. His eyes frantically searched the forest for a place…

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@kyronthearcanin

Sorry for the late response! I don’t have any critique for you today, but great job! =D

@orielle21

Cool! sorry for the late response, I tried to respond to you yesterday but internet didn’t want to work