Orielle2023

@godlyfantasy12

Super awesome topic! Plot twists, and especially betrayals, are some of my favorite things to read/write/dream/plan about!!!

I stalked a topic a while ago so I know about Corvina and November (which I think is super neat).

I’m planning to have one in the new story idea (which I’m just calling The Undefiled for now [based off of…[Read more]

HMMM

Plot twists, eh? XD *is enjoying this waaaaaay too much*

Okay, I have a list that includes moments from different stories (Insert Title and [SPY]DER-MAN which by the way you don’t need to have known about or watched/read the movies or comics to read, I’ll reference some things but I’m making up the characters, plot, etc.), but feel free to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh girl. Thank you for this. I…did not know I needed this reminder. Thanks.

XD y’ALL aNd yOuR eXpReSsIve wRiTiNg aRe mAkInG mE eMoTiOnAl aGaIn

*standing ovation* *well not standing but I would be if I could be*

This…is amazing. It fits the song so well (yes I heard it XD I REALLY REALLY LIKE the music XD I like all the music for…[Read more]

Cool idea!

Skipping over after her, I try to keep my footsteps light against the mossy forest floor. Her red hair waves behind her, and for a moment, I think she’s turned back to see me. I pause, darting behind a tree as she peeks back. I sigh in relief. One of our neighbors next door, I’d always wondered where she spent all of her time, and tha…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

OOOO I love the sketchiness of the lines. I think Finnegan is my favorite of the two, but I really like the way you did Helena’s hands.

@whalekeeper

No not at all! I haven’t read much in that genre, and just might have to check my library for them!

@thearcaneaxiom

If reality is simply the state of existing, what specifically is existing? Is it everything within the universe? Is it everything that is self aware? If man is uniquely created in the image of God, does that not mean that God takes the image of a man, and therefore is distinguished from reality? Is that even meaningful to ask, are…

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@kyronthearcanin

Some parts in chapter two were a bit confusing to me, like the back and forth with the doctors and going to different rooms. And it seemed strange to me that Kirah would tell Keith about what had happened when Jade had told her to keep it a secret. It seemed important that they kept it hidden, but Kirah doesn’t seem too concerned…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks for the heads up about the series! I appreciate it.

@keilah-h

I think this is the last thing you posted about Howzer:

Howzer

The human was trying to touch him.

No!

He crouched still lower and backed away a step or two, hissing. He couldn’t speak their language, nor they his, but he’d found that a well-placed snarl worked fine to get his point across sometimes.

“Don’t touch me.” he growled.…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Your welcome!

No rush! I know how that can be.

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! And I get it, sometimes I even confuse myself with worlds that I built. 🤣

Oh good it’s not just me! 😅🤣

Hmmm…. Good question. I guess I’d like to know if the characters are believable. This first chapter I don’t have as many problems with… The second chapter is where things seem to kind of get weird. I’m a pantser,…

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@thearcaneaxiom

(Warning: existential rant incoming, only read if your comfortable with these harder subjects.)

(Warning acknowledged.)

Then one must ask, what caused reality itself?

(The definition of reality I’m using here is “the state of existing”. Just to be clear.) Perhaps there are two kinds of realities: the reality that has always been,…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Wow, that book sounds epic! I should check it out. Even though I’m not too keen on the ghost part…you know…is it horror or are the ghosts like fairy tale ghosts?

So where’s Shiloh at? Is she nearby cause Felicity (me 😉 ) is up in the balcony and I could come down and meet her if you want?

@princesachronicle22

JALENE (or…[Read more]

@booksbyjana

Great idea!

The scene I am writing right now is the resolution to the climax. The villain has reached her just end, and the heroine is being reunited with her friends. Good has overcome evil, and truth has conquered over lies.

“Hope in Your Eyes” by Tony Gram (Instrumental Epic Cinematic)

Mood: Hope, Victory, Inspiration,…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

I really like this! I’m not usually into reading fantasy that much because excessive world building leaves me often confused, but you did a good job giving us just enough info about the world without it being overwhelming. Also, I love the mysteriousness. Is there anything specific you want comments on?

@godlyfantasy12
Haha! I knew it! XD I love that character so much.

@esther-c
I really like the lettering! The people. XD Abraham Lincoln is my favorite.

@whalekeeper

Aw that’s sweet! For her sake, we must resume! 😉

Love your pfp by the way! Is it one of your characters?

@thearcaneaxiom

(Yeah, I think it’s a good summery. It feels like the word curiosity doesn’t give a complete connotation though.) I’m not sure, perhaps there are different degrees of what curiosity is? Does that stray from the heart of a question? (I would say that curiosity is the right word, but it just feels less driven to me for some reaso…

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