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@felicity

Oh thanks! I like that, I’ll have to let the ideas stew in my brain 🍲

(I hope that wasn’t a ramen emoji. It’s supposed to be stew)

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Tauren and Lesli

Tauren watches from the side as Lesli converses with Luna. Paxton’s eyes dart nervously next to her.

Paxton shifts nervousley before stuttering out that his bear is named Hope.

“Woah, I’ve never seen anyone like you before! How did you get blue hair?” Lesli says with a fascinated…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Hmmm…maybe Releaser?

I looked up opposites of “trap”.

I don’t know if that would sound right though. Afterthoughts of a Releaser.

“Layson became a Releaser.”

Do you want it to be a real word, or a totally made up one? Because if you combine the words bunker and release/liberated/freed, you might get some ideas.

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! 😀

@everybodywhowashavingsomuchfun

ur…sorry…I feel like I was a party pooper.

I am cautious and overly observant of any sort of rules. But yeah if all that was “research” for our writing, than…you all have a very good point there.

😂

@keilah-h

Oh! Sorry I should have explained. In my story, most people live underground in mostly self sufficient communities. It’s not longer necessary, but they fear another war starting if they see people from the other side (there was a civil war like 300 years ago). Being mostly self sufficient, they still need supplies. So sometimes people…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

You’re good. 😀

@lightoverdarkness6

Congrats on 1000 words! Every bit counts! Right now it’s been taking me about a week to write that much… 🙁

Yeah, good idea Asher! Pour the whole bottle of hot sauce in!!

Bobby Roberts is a perfect name for a bully. I like villains who have names like Bill Williams, Jimmy James, Tom Thomson, etc. Their first names are the…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Overall I really liked it! Thanks for sharing it with us!

About the general dynamic, I don’t know what you have planned for the future, I thought the ending scene with the hot sauce didn’t make a lot of sense. It’s only for revenge, and I think pretty much all abused kids (whether emotional or physical) would not react that…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

OH WOW!!

I was not expecting that! It’s totally amazing!!!! <3<3 One of the best plot twists ever!

@lightoverdarkness6

Oh thanks a ton! I’m going to go check it out!!!!

@godlyfantasy12

Id love to hear your ideas! But if you want to save them and share the draft later, thats fine too!

@godlyfantasy12

We can wait for light!

Ok, so Paxton has a teddy? 😭 too cute!

(Kaine has a fox sttuffie) XD

@lightoverdarkness6

LOL

that would be hilarious

It just be like a website where girls swoon about their crushes XD

I’d be horribly embarrassed if anyone else found out about it though 😳

I mean, theoretically, that’s a really embarrassing thing to do 😂 but we do it here anyways because we don’t care XD

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @orielle21

We have snow . . . 16 inches of it at least . . . and a lot more coming . . .

We’re having a blizzard right now!!

Where we live (Ohio) we typically get snow in November, barely any in December, then more in January and February. We’ve actually had snow on Easter before!! 😄

We get snow in October (it u…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oh I LOVE her aesthetic! It’s awesome! 😀

@whalekeeper

Lol! I’m sure they wouldn’t mind XD

@lightoverdarkness6

Yeah! I think if the charries aren’t doing a lot I’ll bring the guard in to provoke people XD

@whalekeeper

I’d love to see your drawing of him!

I just like… see cool character… must draw XD

His description sounds like some anime hero a bit lol, I used to do anime fanart. It’s how I learned to draw people at first.

@lightoverdarkness6

Ok, I’m still not sure 😅 trying to consider how the first title fits into the 2nd and 3rd, thanks for the feedback!

Glad you liked it! And glad you thought that scene with Tauren and Lesli was cute. And yeah, poor Keiryn.🤣