Orielle2023

@freedomwriter76

Ok so, LOVE IT!!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

He had to be on patrol with Riker, the officer that was the same rank as Erich yet was too soft to even handle interrogations?

We all know sweet Riker, and to me this felt like the kind of introduction he might get to people who already are vaguely familiar with him. idk if you…[Read more]

@sarafini @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

“Oh!” I turn backwards, caught between the awkwardness of Derek Len’s blocking our path, esther, and the new girl.

“Hey, I’m Elizabeth. What’s your name?”

“Oh! I’m Lesli…” I smile nervously, one eye still trained on Derek.

(Also Lesli is 19 if any of you guys didn’t know) (I know this is…[Read more]

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

I follow behind Esther as she takes us down some stairs, eager for more exploration. She stops, astonished by a man standing in front of us. I make a face. He looks gross for some reason I cannot explain.

“Derek Len?” Esther says, awestruck.

I raise an eyebrow at her. They know eachother?

“Hate to br…[Read more]

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

Lesli

“Explore this library, of course!”

I rub my hands together excitedly, ready to take off into a grand adventure. I would rather be doing this with–

–oh nevermind. I’ve got plenty of new people to meet here.

Cut off by a piercing scream, I look to my left.

“What was that?”

Are they ok?…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 Sorry I’ve forgotten who else!

Ey! Friday squad, we ready for this?!

@loopylin

XD XD XD

LUCA GO GIVE THAT PART OF HER BRAIN BACK RIGHT NOW

@power

Awesome poem. It seems so effortless to you. Does it just come to you all at once? Been meaning to ask you this for a while…not sure if this is the best place or time…

@elishavet-pidyon

You do? O.O *feels warm and fuzzy* Unfortunately, no, I didn’t make it up. It’s actually Old English.

*smacks forehead* I should have recognized it. Anyway, that’s neat you’re using Old English in your book!!!!!!!

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h  @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Renae and Vidar:

“Have you found anything?”

Renae glanced up from the pastel green sweater she was pulling over a creamy white princess dress. She smiled at Ara. “I’m going to let my hair down, then I’m done.” She pulled her dark hair from…[Read more]

@esther-c

I was thinking about this last night, and although I would love to beta read for you, I’m not sure I would be a good beta reader because #1: I don’t know a lot about the dystopian genre, and #2: it’s really hard for me to give constructive criticism on things. Even though I know it’s good and will help people grow in their writing, it’s…[Read more]

@esther-c

If I have the time when you post it I’d love to beta read for you! (No promises but If it works out I’d be happy to!)

And hey we wright the same genre if that helps!

I love giving advice and would love to help you iron it out 🙂

@orielle21

No worries!

Wow, you remember a lot of details. *round of applause almost put applesauce on accident* I think I need to reread the Hobbit now. XD

Aaaand I’m not ignoring your third installment, I just gotta do school first before reading it. =)

@freedomwriter76

…I don’t know how you do it, but I’m already invested in these characters.

*eagerly awaits learning more about them whenever you share more information*

What’s their last name, by the way?

@folith-feolin

Indeed. Fortunately I have found fellows with familiar fates.

@freedomwriter76

Of course, glad I could help! =)

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

Imma go ahead and warn you now that I’m fairly liable to misunderstand you. 😅

The reason for all of this ravenous inner turmoil, was because of the absence of THE greatest figure in all of Kingdom Pen history. Nor shall there ever be a figure as great ever again.

That person…. is yours truly.

Eh…I think God is t…[Read more]

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

The Throne-Worthy Dual:

Stroke First: The contestant must be strong. How many push-ups can you do in a row?

@felicity @not-so-secret-secret-assassin

Tis not wise to let just anyone claim the throne of Kingdom Pen without making him prove his worth.

HEAR YE, HEAR YE!

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

Why hello.

Glad you decided to come back, although I must disagree about the wingfeather saga with you. And all 7 of my mc’s will run to protect me if you try anything of the sort. Everly’s scary good with a bow. Beware.

I will heartily agree with anyone who says the first book is terrible, I read it out of…[Read more]