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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!
And wow, that’s a great idea! I’ve read both Warriors and Wings of Fire (up until… a certain point? I don’t know how long they’ll keep going…), but never thought of actually doing it myself. Thanks again for the awesome idea! I will definitely get to work on that. If I ever post it, I’ll definitely tag you! 😃
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Heya, I was just watching the nursery babies tonight! Only two, but the sweetest little boogers ever…
…And that was meant as a compliment 😂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!
Yeah, I’m definitely working on transitioning scenes, especially the battle there.
I’ll just have to let you wonder about Quelin… Don’t want to spoil it lol. But I do love his character and enjoyed writing him. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!
For quite a while, though I’ve never really been serious about it. Just kind of random scribbles in notebooks, that technically are supposed to be for schoolwork lol. I basically just needed to get the idea for what Rina was going to look like. That drawing is probably one of my favorites. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks for the great advice! I will definitely be working on all of that. I’ve noticed that a lot of the time I forget to describe, or maybe fully describe things.
Thanks for taking the time to read it! 🙂
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Enid replied to the topic Help! I need a title! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
The Emmons sisters are a really fun resource! 😄
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @landric @gwyndalf-the-wise @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else
Alright! For anyone who wants to read, this is chapter 2 of Healer. It introduces a couple of my favorite characters. This is definitely open to critique, as I want to see what readers think of it. Sometimes the writer can’t see flaws, or even strengths, in their…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
I’m actually probably getting ready to put up my second chapter for any possible feedback, so I’ll definitely tag you. Thanks for the compliments! I’ve always loved the “halfling” sort of idea and have to be careful not to do that to all of my characters lol. And yeah, I’ve been trying to figure out a way to describe Rina and the setting…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I understand 😉 I hope the rest of your day is better, and that you won’t let negative stuff get to you! *Insert-heart-emoji-that-I-cannot-type-on-my-computer-XD*
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Sorry to barge in, but I totally understand the whole ‘hiding in your room’ thing right now. It feels kind of wrong and almost claustrophobic, but sometimes that’s a really hard cycle to get out of. If you do it a lot, I recommend going outside, or taking a walk, or somewhere you can let your thoughts float around, instead of…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Zeke and Ginger! They’re technically from a fantasy story, but I’m totally gonna modernize them for this 😛 So, info for everyone, Zeke is deaf and mute. He can read lips and communicate using sign language. For this, I’mma just pretend everyone knows sign language (or maybe they’re reading his mind?? I dunno), so I can put his comments…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Okay cool
Waaaiiiit are Dante and Ellie a thing??
Yeah, I can picture that XD Even when our elderly people are told to go first, every boy makes a beeline for the spot behind the first patriarch…
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I KNOW right?!?!?
Ha you’re right, he already knows – maybe I learned it from him XDXDXD
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Enid replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yup 😉
I used to… honestly, that’s been put on hold since my laptop stopped working. All my poems were on there, other than the ones in notebooks of course. You?
I haven’t forgotten the topic!! Do you want married couples, or dating, or even just lovey-dovey eyes?
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
oKAY guys, I know this is kinda random, but you know how in stories, those trouble-making, attractive, super characters (usually with nice hair) have a lopsided grin?? It’s like a cliche now, right?
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I JUST REALIZED I’VE DEVELOPED A LOPSIDED GRIN!!!
XDXDXD
I’ve never been so satisfied when it comes to my own expressions before.…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh goodness gracious thank you, I blush too easily XD
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Enid replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
*Bows* I sat there for like, a couple minutes trying to think of a good one
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Enid replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I have a feeling this is going to fill up my inbox faster than teenage boys fill up the line on potluck Sundays…
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Enid replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
WHAT THE –
Oooooooo *hits subscribe button*
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Top Secret. The Statemency. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yes! The statemency will fall!
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