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@trailblazer

Looks good!!

…which may erase the memories altogether…

(I don’t know how many times I’m supposed to participate 😅)

@keilah-h

Yeah, it’s definitely not like a complete copy-paste job. It definitely has its own aesthetic and everything, and that’s why I mentioned I don’t hold to that critique as much anymore. So I agree.

The school itself felt like the biggest “ooh let’s follow the trend” element of the story. Like I mentioned, Prattle’s pins are literally jus…[Read more]

A magic system that anyone can use, to hypnotize a human being and potentially capture their memories on photographs. The only drawback is…

@loopylin

Those look awesome!!

@thearcaneaxiom

That’s such a cool concept!!

@rae

Nice topic! Thanks for making it! I’ll maybe share some of my stuff sometime, Idk.

@janellebelovedpig
Awesome! Nice job!!

@calyhuge

Wait a sec. Who did Loy attack? I can’t tell because it’s just referenced.

@beth-torres

Hi Elizabeth, welcome to Kingdom Pen!!

I’m hybridlore on here, a homeschooled high schooler, sci-fi/dystopian writer, violinist, and follower of Jesus. It’s nice to meet you!

I didn’t read everyone’s questions, so if I give you the same one, don’t worry about answering it.

What are your favorite books/series?

What’s the plot of…[Read more]

@acancello

Nice job!

@trailblazer

Sorry I never got back to you on that! I would post about the things you like, what You’ve been doing lately, or things you’ve learned recently. Everyone has their own interests so a lot of what I like might no seem interesting to you.

@euodia-vision @trailblaze

Y’all could always talk about books you’ve been…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

That works so much better! I’m excited to see what you come up with for Nano!

@elishavet-pidyon

I agree with Freedom, I think the only main thing I noticed was the characters were a bit confusing in the beginning. I didn’t know if we were looking at two of Viktor’s friends, but then I realized one was his father. Maybe change a…[Read more]

@loopylin

Have you listened to any electro-swing? You should listen to Caravan Palace. They’re one of my favorite bands. :]

I’m literally SO into electro swing right now it’s INSANE!! It’s so energetic and quirky and addicting!! I was going to share some of my favorites on the character playlist strand! I’ve only listened to a bit of Caravan P…[Read more]

@loopylin

Wow, they’re so, like… Idk, they remind me of this old dark academia aesthetic, with gargoyles or something. ❤😂❤

Behold, the pile of thoughts which has no actual importance to anybody 😂😫

So.

Um…

Strong thoughts.

I’ve actually continued the series – on book five now – and I think I can judge it better now, being halfway through. I know the world well.

That being said, I don’t know everything 😅

Keeper of the Lost Cities is one of those things where I love it and hate it simultaneously, completely on purpose. I read it all the t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Huh.

That is…

I would have never thought about that. Splendiferously good question. Tell me if you ever find an answer.

@calyhuge

I was literally JUST going to revisit this topic 🤣 for certain reasons. I’ll post what I was going to say myself in a little bit, and respond to your points here.

1. Entirely agree.

2. Yep yep yep, and not just in the first book. Onward, as they say.

3. One of my biggest character critiques.

4. I wouldn’t necessarily call this a bad…[Read more]

@smiley

but I kind of thought like Harry Potter (never seen the movies or read the books but I’ve seen clips of the dance they have and it’s like a boarding school version of a prom and they dress pretty fancy

Exactly

ELECTRO SWING.

❤️

Will return with songs shortly.