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whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 hours, 52 minutes ago
As long as you love it and it contains a piece of your heart, that’s all that matters. <3
I’m not sure how to feel about this. I feel more as if I’m trying to put my heart into it, and I haven’t found the way to express it in writing format. But thanks for the encouragement. 😁
If this were the case, then w…
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 hours, 5 minutes ago
However, one thing I do know is that Eric was always supposed to turn into a wolf.
This is why I don’t want to say no, because I know what it feels like to connect with an idea.
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 hours, 8 minutes ago
Agh… Having read this, I am completely divided. And I mean seriously divided, which doesn’t happen to me often when giving an opinion.
If Eric pulled a Kalmar, I honestly think the comparisons to Wingfeather wouldn’t stop. There are already similarities in lore, and while there are differences, Featherheads are probably g…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 hours, 26 minutes ago
Yes, I thought of you as a quieter girl. Lover of books. Long light/medium brown hair. Writer, friendly, softer spoke.
*shrug*
Not sure if any of that is true. (except I know the hair isn’t.)
I mean yeah, that sounds pretty accurate. I may be more talkative than you pictured, but everything else sounds right.
Wait a s…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 hours, 29 minutes ago
Wait a minute… so, what?? You’re introducing like a middle-East themed culture??
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 24 minutes ago
You know who Lindsey Stirling is? Lol, yeah, I did have a picture of someone with a violin and like a library at some point, so that checks out.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 30 minutes ago
Feels like a battle vibe, but oh well. The Empire does do a lot of fighting, right? But Leon and Julian themselves wouldn’t really be a part of it probably.
I decide lots of things about people I don’t know because me mind likes to have a face to go with a name, and when I don’t have one, I view what I know as the building block…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 52 minutes ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 56 minutes ago
Hah, you always say that whenever I guess at what’s going to happen. But you do try to throw me off a lot, so I’m just not going to listen. 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 2 minutes ago
I really like it!! I’m seeing a lot of battle, soldiers, and little girls… hmm… 🤔
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 6 minutes ago
That’s fair. Lol
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 10 minutes ago
Wow, you really do sound like Power. 😅
Good, I can’t wait to get to know them better since right now their personalities kind of blend together.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 17 minutes ago
Okay, I mostly like Julian to be honest. I don’t know much about Leon yet, but I’ll probably grow to like him too.
There wasn’t going to be a third and fourth book in the first place. There wasn’t going to be a second one for that matter. But they wouldn’t shut up and let me move on. I believe that God wanted to say some more…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 30 minutes ago
Oh no… oh no… Ellette, what are you going to do to them?? My poor Leon and Julian!! 😢
And we totally called that they were going to be the next leads.😉I love the title and the verse at the beginning too. I’m excited to see what happens next… 😬
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 day, 2 hours ago
Also I love that quote about “not to speak is to speak, not to act is to act.” I might steal that for Alec’s board.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 day, 2 hours ago
It looks great! Does he play the violin? 😁
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whaley replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 day, 3 hours ago
Heeeyy I saw that museum immortal animation too!! XD Out of all the YouTube videos, that’s crazy. Yeah, I bet it will be really fun to imagine and write.
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whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 6 hours ago
However, one this is one thing I know of that does help me. I find that something that motivates me is having people share it with me and give me some thoughts right away.
My first draft, as it is, is very undecipherable. However I am comfortable sharing things with my little sister and I’ll keep this in mind.
Keep in mind…
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whaley replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 6 hours ago
So… the first draft of Guardian Angels I literally started writing while waiting for a piano lesson
So real, though. I probably invented 50% of my early story concepts while waiting for piano lessons.
Sorry, don’t think I am qualified to help even if I could.
It’s okay! If you get an idea, shout it out, because I think anyone with exp…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
Aww, poor Riker. 🥺
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