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1st section:

1)  I like the opening sentence 😉

2)  In the second paragraph, I think it would flow better if you shortened some of the sentences by omitting unnecessary words/details or splitting the sentences into two sentences

3)  “The loud whirring of the distant, useless generator breaking broke the howling of the wind through jagged pea…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Hey!!  I was thinking I could look through each post if you wanted me to and proofread each separately (so I don’t write all the changes in one long post).  Sound good?

@writerlexi1216

Hello!!  Welcome to KP!  I’m Ella and I used to be homeschooled, but now I go to a classical Christian school.  I loooovve cats, working out, basketball, listening to music, and writing thriller/suspense/dystopian books.  My cat is a brindle named Jasmine and she’s super sassy! 😂

I know everyone’s asked you a lot of questions alr…[Read more]

Would your character rather be able to have extreme jumping skills or be able to maneuver every maze?

Isa:  maneuver every maze

Andrew: extreme jumping skills

New question:

Would you rather go on a cruise on the fjords in Norway or go to the Caribbean?

As the cat gazed down at the twinkling little lights, everything went quiet–then the world went black.

Next one:

Ooo, can I join?

Would your character rather give money to a random charity or to their crazy uncle (or whatever relative they have that’s crazy)?

Isa:  random charity

Sawyer:  crazy uncle

My question:

Would your character rather choose all the rooms in their own castle (spa, workout room, etc.), or would they rather all the rooms in the…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Thanks!

As the smoke gathered around their feet, they were gone–all disappeared except him.  

Ooo, can I join?!?!!!

@alia

She stood five feet away from where I was hidden in the shadows, staring at the screen where the greatest secret of humankind was displayed:  Your life is a lie.

Next picture:

@alia

What’s next??   I love it!!!!!!!  It’s not over the top at all.  Great job, I hope there’s more…

@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @kathleenramm

Cool beans.   Thanks!!  I like all those characters (Scarlett O’Hara got under my skin tho, haha )

@kathleenramm

Inception, big time.  Sooo good!!  Some of the Dark Phoenix songs are good too.

Hans Zimmer 😆

@emberlynn

Hey! I’m Ella.  I just joined KP too!  It looks like you’ve already been inundated with questions, so I’ll just say hi! 😉  (Btw, I’m also on SE.  What’s your name there(optional, of course))

@libby

You like piano?  My sister is so good!!!!  She’s learning a song from the movie Inception, as well as all of Jennifer Thomas’ songs.  (You should check her out if you haven’t heard of her—so good!!😍)  I play a little bit, but not much.  I should, but…😉

Well, my name is Ella;  I go to a classical Christian school;  I love physics a…[Read more]

I’m a plantser—right in between potter and pantser.  I guess I lean a little more toward plotter, though.

i plan the characters, basic plot and several scenes, then I write. 😊