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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice You asked how I imagined Quillon. Well, I couldn’t find an exact picture, but it’s almost like this, but with blue eyes, of course. 😉

What do you think? Is it extremely different from your picture?
Oh, in case you wonder, it’s Frankie Avalon. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Really really really? Let me read it!! 😀 😀 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Hm, that might make more sense. I thought Jonas knew a bit of Justice’s backstory already, but I guess, obviously, he doesn’t know all of it. And yes, that would definitely make for some good conversations in Empty. (window scenes…?? 😉 )
You’d have to find a reason for Chessy to kiss Justice anyway, right? I bet you could wo…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice Bringing our discussion from both the second draft doc and Writers’ Corner here because I’m about to give you a long rant. 😛
After reading both the original draft and the second draft again in the “Chestice” conversation section, I figured out what the problem with it was.
Justice has ignored or put down Chessy for the entire…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Aww, @rochellaine, I wish I could!! I miss you, too! Hopefully I’ll be doing some writing soon.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel My friend-who-looks-like-a-wolf-but-says-she-is-not has been here, and I missed her again?? 🙁
Please, please, be on sometime when I’m also on!! I haven’t talked with you in FOREVER!!!
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Catwing replied to the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
@daughteroftheking here it is. *waves shiny coin because of conversation that was here before* ;P
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Here I am, doubting myself again. XD
Thank you so much for the reminder. I really needed it. It’s easy to forget how God is in control of me and of everything.
Well, I’m going to sign off. It was good to see you! I’ll try to make a point to stop by more often… and read your book of course! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Thanks for tagging me! I’m so excited to read it!! 😀 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Yeah, I lot of stuff has changed since I started coming by off and on.
These days the only stuff I write about is Aetherlight-related. I wish I had the inspiration to write something unique and original, not relying on someone else’s setting and stuff. I guess I’m insecure. I’m not sure. And I know I have the ability and…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, THAT thing? Practically abandoned. Although I may tinker with it occasionally… Right now I’m working on Aetherlight stuff.
Awesome! Thanks! I’ll read it pretty soon. 😉
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Joy's profile was updated 7 years, 10 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Aww, do you?! *blushes*
Aye, that’s fine. 🙂 I’m excited to read your series! It sounds amazing.
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Hi! I know. I wish I could come here more often. I’m not spending enough time here… And I miss you guys!
So… is it okay if I read Stars Fill Infinity?
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Joy started the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Methinks it’s time for a new Corner.
Anyway, I suppose I’ll be writing for a while. Any Australians/Night owls here?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Basically the biggest problem I have with this new version of Stars is Justice’s character. He’s completely different. He’s no longer stiff, he now notices Chessy, which was a huge thing in the first draft. He now opens up to her all of a sudden and tells her his entire history and dreams just because Sapphire said he should be ni…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy I do like it when I’m on vacation and I get up early. (weird. People usually go on vacation to sleep in late.) I do feel like I get more done in the day, and I feel healthier. However, that might just be “I’m out of the house” excitement, because when I’m at home, if I get up early I feel extremely tired all afternoon, even if I tak…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy I hope not! 😛 It was because we wanted to play soccer for twenty minutes or so before my dad had to leave for work. It’s easier to be sure everyone will be home early in the morning, so we played at around 7:20 a.m., which meant I had to wake up at about 7:00. Not really early, I know… 😛
I usually wake up around 9:00. At lea…[Read more]
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Catwing posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
Sorry this is taking me so long to edit through this but I think I have editing figured out now. Cutting down the POVs to just Alex, Chase, and Cele. Finally letting go of the VR beginning that I was stubbornly clinging to. If you realised something about the whole VR please tell me cuz in my mind it only foreshadows book two and I don’t want to…[Read more]
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I’m glad to help! So, due to some problems on my end of the line, I can no longer edit the Google Doc. Well, I can sometimes, but the weird thing is, some days my computer can connect, some days it just won’t. I can still read it, and offer some general critiques, but I can’t comment. Is that ok?
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For general stuff it might be easier to post it on the thread I created (I shall dig that up), but I replied to some of your comments so for that and pointing out exactly where things are you could comment on the doc.
I have it anyone with a link can comment, if you can’t comment you can request access. If you can’t do that I can change the link…[Read more]-
@daughteroftheking you can contact me through my blog and I can give you access.
Send me a imaginary pigeon ;3-
Sorry I’m late! (again!) I still have access, the problem is just my own computer being inconsistent. I can still comment most of the time, but I wanted to warn you that Google Docs and I are not the best of friends right now. 😛 I’m going to put beta reading as part of my school schedule (yay for homeschooling), so hopefully I can be more…[Read more]
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I see. If it keeps happening you can email me and I’ll add you directly.
Yay homeschooling!
It’s been a month so I started my next draft. But it’s coming very slowly… I may editing it on the draft you have access to. Chapter one nearly done. So you can try and get me to work faster. 😉
Thanks! It tis a grand song.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy Okay, I’ll be on for a bit. I think. I’m actually really sleepy right now, (shocker, 😛 ) because I got up early this morning.
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