Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin

@ellette-giselle

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Some of the characters had very compelling characteristics, like Jim’s human decency and Evan with his likable dialogue. They all served their roles and were decently memorable. Jonathan was my favorite because he was the POV…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m trying to fill out these feedback questions before I lose track of what’s happening. *Types furiously*

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

I say remove the part about tragedy striking, and only…[Read more]

also what did you do to the URL to get it to temporarily admin-ify you?

@linus-smallprint It’s cool how you took classes or something for this kinda thing!

That would be cool too, I’d totally give my feedback if you did it.

@ellette-giselle ohhhh ok!

cool emblem too!

^Are they siblings/cousins.

@ellette-giselle I don’t know, but they look pretty similar, so….

@ellette-giselle oooh new main characters!!!

Are they related? or no?

Looks like they’re defectors from the army!

Honestly, I would love that, but there’s one little problem with Wix. I’ve been on two Wix-created sites, and they start off great, but something about them just……dies really easily and they become ghost towns with like maybe a single post every two weeks or something.

@liberty

oooh, is he the villain? or a character who’s on the good side but doesn’t have good intentions?

thoughts:

-he’s either a legitimate heir who shouldn’t be on the throne for some reason but is/wants to be, or a usurper.

-he has a pet crow or raven

-he’s killed before and will kill again

-someone close to him died or he lost…[Read more]

@grcr

Hehe, I love it. XD Well done! And yes, I have wondered that question before. Thank you for your insightful answer, Braxton.

Can I just say – these three boys feel like they have similar denominators from an aesthetic side, and I’m all for it.

@elishavet-pidyon @loopylin
Hugo

“Physical education. All the high school kids will be there.” Hugo waited until Viktor looked up from his desk again. He bent over so their faces were on the same level, and studied the other boy’s eyes. “Do people normally badger you like that?”

And technically he’s from Quebec, do some stuff is in French. Which is certainly interesting, just not helpful. O_o

@whalekeeper

That would be lovely. I might just have to recruit you, if I can find stuff.

I did find something called the Youth Act, but while it had a lot of instructions for foster organizations, it didn’t seem to have any for a kid who has no parents left.

The foreign element is the problem – otherwise if I knew where to look, I’d look.

@koshka

As someone who likes writing adoption tropes and found family, I sympathize. I’ve had similar problems, just not of this magnitude. If you end up finding the laws themselves, and if there are long documents to read online, I will be more than happy to take assignments and write up summaries of what I find..? XD That’s a weird offer, but I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Any call for assistance is greatly appreciated. I have no clue who to tag.

(Totally didn’t freak out when I realized that since this book is technically set in the real world it has to at least look believable, and I can’t just write the law myself. Fantasy author problems)

@theducktator

Well, it wasn’t Google’s expertise either.…[Read more]

I’ve been here for too long. Finishing at :50. Good night, everyone. XD

Me: “What do you think of this?” *Shows him a specific plot point*

S: “Eh…”

Me: “What’s wrong?”

S: “You don’t know enough about electromagnetic transmitters. But your magic system is extremely complex and depends on much more than this. How do you know you aren’t making ridiculous mistakes? You’ll make me look stupid. I’m only as smart as…[Read more]