Natalie C.

@nanisnook,

Sprinting with you for an hour! Starting at :00.

@nanisnook

First of all – that was really good! It was interesting and engaging, and I was hooked  why did you leave us on a cliffhanger I am so curious now lol !

Ember is quite likeable. I agree with what some of the others have said, seeing her emotions a little more clearly would be nice, but overall, I thought she was a great character. She…[Read more]

@nanisnook

No problem! And thank you so much! <33

@faith-q

Woohoo! Awesome sprint. Thank you for joining me, Faith! 😀

@nanisnook

Yup, still going! 😀

@nanisnook @mkfairygirl @sami-eastwood @issawriter7 @nova21 @faith-q @morgan @elfwing @joelle-stone @madwoman @gracie-j @iluvhim18 @all-ya’ll-KeePers/Kapeefers

Well, I’m back in the car, and I have about 5 hours of writing ahead of me. Are any of you lovely ladies available to write for a bit? 😀

@nanisnook

I’m sorry I had to miss your…[Read more]

@nanisnook,

Your writing is really, really good! I enjoyed the fast pace. Ember and her brother are certainly very likeable, and the first person perspective is very clear. But I think I agree with @jodi-maile. You may need to pause a bit more a reflect on what’s going on in Ember’s head instead of focusing entirely on external things. Besides…[Read more]

@nanisnook

lol thanks!

Have fun with it and shed some tears… but I admit it is fun to get the feedback from the heartbroken readers who lived the character lolol

i had five hornets when I did it to mine 😂

@nanisnook

Of course, and thank you so much for letting me read your story! I had a lot of fun and I think your chapters are off to a great start! 🙂

@nanisnook

Girl, I’d love to read your first three chapters!!! EEEEKKK!!!! I actually can’t wait, but I’m super busy today, so I probably won’t be able to get to it tomorrow, if that’s okay!! <3333 🙂 Is there anything specific you’d like me to look for?

@lydia-s That’s alright, Lydia!! 🙂 Thank you!!!! 🙂

@nanisnook I’m so sorry I missed your sprint!!!! I’ve been reading today and am just now sitting down to write my 100-word goal.

@nanisnook

oh mannn I love doing that but I have made myself cry very hard—

one of my favourites being when everyone thought the guy was dead for 20 years and the he guards the family of the girl he loved the whole time and they don’t even know it! The girl had died tragically and so he didn’t see a reason to reveal to the others he was alive…[Read more]

Hi @nanisnook! I finished reading your chapters and wrote up some of my thoughts:

I really liked your chapters. Ember is a likable main character and her brother is also likable! I did feel a bit like the chapters went by pretty quickly with a lot of action (which was nicely done, by the way!) but not quite as many internal moments to pause and…[Read more]

@nanisnook

Well, I’ve gotta jump out here now. I wrote 832 words and my final line is:

She shifted her feet and stared at the ground.

THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing with me, girl!!!!! <33

@nanisnook

Yup, but probably just for a couple more minutes. 🙂

@nanisnook Alright! I’ll probably be back soon, but right now I’m going to research old battle strategies for my scifi 😂

Okay, signing out at :09 with 788 words down! Thanks for writing with me!! @issawritee7 @nanisnook

@nanisnook

Okey-dokey!!!! 😉

@nanisnook Yay!! Thanks 💕 Jumping in at :45

Hey! Are you girls still sprinting by any chance? @nanisnook @issawriter7 @

@nanisnook

Yup!! I’ll join at :30!!!