Natalie C.

@lydia-s

Are you still going?

@faith-q
Also, I just got your email about wanting access. That was you, right? So sorry I didn’t see it till now. You were able to see it, right?

@faith-q
Thank you! I’ll be sure to add in some more internal…uh..ness? Thanks so, so much for reading it!! <333

@issawriter7

That would be awesome!! Whenever you could get to it would be great. What I’m looking for… I suppose especially the main character, Ember. If she’s a good character or not. And then, just if it reads smoothly enough being in 1st person.

Thank you so much!!

@jodi-maile

Thank you so much!! Especially about the sword fight. It’s great to hear that it was good from someone that used to do it!

To explain about the war, there technically isn’t one yet. Her brother is just in the army responding to little things like the raids. There will be a bigger war toward the end of the book. It’s good to know…[Read more]

@mkfairygirl No worries!! Oh, reading sounds so nice. I need to just have a day of reading 🙂

@elfwing

That IS mean!! Man, now I really want to read that story XD. Yes, I am probably going to sort of kill him today. Yay.

@issawriter7

Thank YOU so much!!! I wrote 898 words and my last line is:

Just me and him for a long moment.

@issawriter7 Okay 🙂

@daisy-torres Wow, awesome word count!! I love your signature/tag line thingy btw.

@issawriter7 Are you still going?

@daisy-torres @issawriter7

I’ve got to go fold some laundry, but I’ll be back in a bit if y’all are still going!

@daisy-torres

Great!! Good luck!

@issawriter7

Lol me too XD. I think I might finally be getting somewhere though. We shall see.

@daisy-torres

Yep! You’re welcome to join us!!

@issawriter7 Awesome!!

@lydia-s @mkfairygirl @scripter-of-kingdoms @issawriter7 @nova21 @elfwing  @gracie-j @reila @absolutely-anyone-else

Anyone up for an hour-ish sprint? I could use some motivation

@relia
I’m about to kill a charrie. 🙁 This is so hard! I mean, I know that he actually lives. BUT HIS SISTER DOESN’T!!!

@writerlexi1216 @jodi-maile @relia

Thank you all so much!! I suppose the main thing that I want critiqued is the main character, Ember. That’s she’s likable enough, I suppose. Also, I haven’t written in 1st person before, and I just want to be sure that everything is clear in that person. Oh, and there’s a sword fight in chapter 3, and I haven’t…[Read more]

@mkfairygirl Aww I’m sorry. Writer’s block is the worst 🙁

You’re welcome. I’m glad we could!!!!