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@rochellaine

Yeah I think I might do that. Thanks!

@mnvalentine

I agree with what everyone else has said. I think the problem has to do with the pacing and the passiveness of the main character. There is a lot of description that slow the story down and much of the information conveyed through dialogue could have easily been summed up in a few lines.

Just some thoughts…

#1: The article in the…[Read more]

@daeus

I might consider that. Thanks!

@rochellaine

Haha I know you guys are all really nice. The problem is that people outside the KP forums can access it as well and I’m shy about my writing. 😳

@that_writer_girl_99

Hmm… I did think about using that feature but I know not everyone may want to give out their email so I wanted to check if…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking

Yep. I guess I will just have to get over myself if I can’t think of another way. 😅

Thanks!

@skredder  Ugh…

It was pretty good! Today, incredibly enough, was the first time in my entire life I have ever dyed eggs.

Except with the holiday, I’m NOT ready for Monday… 😛

@skredder  I disappeared. But I suppose I can reappear again before disappearing for two months…

How was your Easter?

@daughteroftheking  *leans back and smirks with delight at the tap-dancing tiger* Most delightful thing ever.

Anyway, you’re welcome! 😉

@skredder  Beautiful. 😉

@daeus  Well, yeah! Obviously I’m not the BEST at endings. XD

Two… thousandth… post…  O.O

@epicaddie2  @seekjustice  @sam-kowal  @rochellaine  @jane-maree

Wow. Okay, seeing what you guys are posting about Camp NaNoWriMo makes me want to be a member. XD

*double-takes* Hang on — am I a–

Edit: Oh. My. Word. I’m a Chosen One, guys! 0.0 😀

I just made a serious mistake: Not everyone wants to, or is able to, submit their entries on the doc! So I will allow you to submit it here. In fact, I think it’s best if you submit it here.

Submit this information:

Name:
Species: (Can be human. Or anything else…)
Appearance:
Personality:
Other notes and/or facts:

And if you are already on…[Read more]

@rochellaine  I invited you to the CSC. Are you able to edit it?

@jenwriter17  @skredder  @rochellaine

I’m reading some Tale of Two Cities if anyone want to join.

(To those of you who are viewing this from your email, this is Readers’ Corner not Writers’ Corner. 😉 )

@foreverme  Ohh, I’m so glad you liked it!  And it’s okay you’re late. 😉

@daughteroftheking  Yes, praise God!

Thanks so much, N.C.!! Love ya, too, sister. 😉

@warrenluther04  Thank God for stirring her heart! You will be missed, pal. 😉

To everyone who has been praying for me, thank you so much! One of the friends I invited came to my church today, and liked it!!! She might even come back! 😀 😀 😀 Thank you so much!!!! 🙂 🙂

@catwing , @rochellaine , @jenwriter17 , @dragon-snapper , @everyone-else

To everyone who knows about my hiatus…it starts…now. 🙂 Goodbye for now, and…[Read more]

@sam-kowal  Thank you!!

I’ll look forward to seeing you two again, as well. I can’t wait to see how Stan has grown (or shrunk…)

@ariel-ashira  Thanks a lot!! Ahhhh, satisfying endings…

@daeus  Was it that good? Awwww, thanks!!

@jenwriter17  Ohhh, thanks!!

My pleasure!! I didn’t know it would be so lengthy. XD

@supermonkey42  Yes, good choice of words. This morning I was hiding eggs for kids, and I felt just about the same way. 😉

Yes, awesome. Why do you think I call it the “bestest place in Cyberspace?” XD

You’re welcome! I shall be looking forward to my return

@skredder  You’re welcome!! I’m glad you like it. 😀

@ingridrd  Thank you! Yes, sa…[Read more]

The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story

Part the Last: Joy, Mirth, and Acclamation

“Three…”

It was noon. The public Easter worship service at the castle Regnis had recently come to a close. Creamy clouds slid across the sky, and The Raspberry Sun shone upon the Kingdom of Pen, bringing refreshing warmth.

“…Two…”

Jenna was lounging in a lawn chair (w…[Read more]