@mkfairygirl
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Thank you! Yep! Ah, cool! I’ve never seen The Last Airbender. I should give it a try. 😉 Um, I guess, lol. I’m not sure but it sounds like it. XD Ooh, that’s cool! I bet it was fun!
So, the powers are hereditary. And because there is a lot of prejudice and hate between each country, families have stayed in the same country for generations. They don’t leave their country, and they don’t marry outside of it. Am I making any sense, lol?
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with JesusGirl, I love that the magic in your story comes from God. That’s how I’m doing it in my story as well. 😀 It’s almost as if exploring the question, “What if God created the world to work and be like this?” Anyway, I love how you’re doing it in your story world and magic system!
Wow, that’s so cool that you have a fantasy Queen Esther retelling!! I love that idea!
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@thearcaneaxiom Cool forum topic!
Your magic system sounds so cool!!! 😀 I love that it has a chemistry base//chemistry inspiration!
For my current fantasy novel, the magic system is kind of like “powers.” I guess a better way of putting that is that the characters have magical abilities. Depending on what country they’re from determines what kind of magic and abilities they have. So, for example, in one country, they have nature-related powers. (Think Elsa’s ice powers in Frozen.) Then in another country, their powers pertain to anything metal-related.
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
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Aw, you’re super welcome!!! I’m so glad I was able to help!💗 And, YAY, I’m so happy to hear you love your new chapters now!!!!
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@joy-caroline Yes, definitely! My opening chapters often feel flat. I write things that happen to the characters and that I think are important, only to figure out later that it wasn’t really important or added anything to the overall story. Sometimes my opening chapters drag on, and I decide that I need to move into the plot quicker or make the character more interesting to pull the reader through. Is there a way you can establish what you need while making what’s going on more interesting in the story? Maybe something you can ask yourself is “Is what I’m giving/presenting to the reader really important to the plot?” Or “Do they really care to know this information?” If it’s things you feel like you need to establish, are there places where you can combine it with more interesting scenes?
These are just some thoughts. I don’t know if it’s helpful, but I hope you’ll be able to figure out what you need to do with your story and how to make it better!<33
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@lewilliams Hey! I just now saw your message to me.
I seriously have no idea how I missed it. XDBut anyway, to answer your question, I’m actually not on YDubs, but I do have friends who are on it."It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with JesusAh, yes I am an editor for Elfwing’s book! I believe I know who you are!😀
What a small world we live in. XDDOooh, I love “The God Who Stays”!!!!!!!! 😀 That’s such a great song!!!!! Matthew West’s song, “Mended” is another one of his that I love! Music without words is really pretty!!! And Irish-type music is awesome!!!!! I’ve never heard “Toward the Sun” before, but I listened to it just now, and oh my goodness IT WAS INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!! 😀 I was wanting to get up and dance to it! XD Okay, so this one song, “In the Stars” is really good, and I just have to recommend it if you haven’t heard it already. It has some amazing fantasy vibes to it. 😉
Oh yeah, I remember you telling me that now. Ah yes, the Bible is the BEST book ever!!!! (That’s awesome!) Cool. Elfwing’s book is super good, isn’t it?! 😉 I haven’t finished it yet (I think I’m over halfway done), but what I’ve read so far has been great!! I especially love her characters!!
Cool! Horses and butterflies are awesome!! And, eeeee, YES to dragons and griffins!!!!!! XD Oooh, that sounds fun!!!!
Ahh, no worries!! Your reply didn’t feel late at all! Sometimes it takes me like a week before I’m able to respond to stuff. XD
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@unsung Hi!! It’s nice to meet you!! Welcome to the Kingdom!!! I’m glad @elfwing and @elanor got you to join!!! 😉
*high-fives for being a fellow Jesus-follower* I love Jesus and fantasy as well!!! I read your inspiration behind your username and may I just say that I love that reasoning!! 😀 It’s awesome!!!
What’s your favorite song? Favorite book? Favorite animal (real or mythical)?
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@joy-caroline I’m glad to hear you’ve been doing good!<3 Oof, I totally feel ya. School has kept me busy as well. I’m doing good. I’m excited for summer to get here, though, lol. Are you doing any writing this month?
Yay! I’m glad the questions went through!!
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@e-k-seaver CONGRATS!!!!!!!🥳 That’s so exciting!!!!
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@joy-caroline Hey, girl!!! How’s it going?? I’ve missed talking to you!<3
Ah, YES, thanks for posting this!!! I’ve been meaning to go over to your blog to submit questions, but I kept forgetting. I’ll head over there right now! 😉
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@trahia-the-minstrel Wow, that snippet sounds great!!!! 😀
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@devastate-lasting This looks cool!!! Thank you so much for the tag!!
@karissa-chmil Oh dear, there’s been a tragedy at YWW. I will definitely be praying for you guys!🙏"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@avacoulter Whoa, that’s so COOL that you’re working on a dystopian trilogy!!!!!!!!! I’ve been pretty interested in the dystopian genre lately!!!! (Haha, yep, I totally know what you mean!😉) OooOooo, those are SUPER cool titles!!!!!!! Aaah, they make the series sound so intriguing!!!!! Aw, don’t be discouraged. I’m sure God will inspire you with the right ideas to make your story great!<3 I can’t wait to see it published one day!!! Oooh, sci-fi and time travel! That sounds cool! I bet it’s a fun story to write! 😉
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
Fall in love with Jesus@godlyfantasy12 Whoa, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! 😀 It was enjoyable to read, and I LOVE the rhyme you had going on!!!!! FANTASTIC poem, girl!!!!!! 😀
My only suggestion is that it seemed like there needed to be a period between “dreams” and “Pitch” in this part –> “shattered dreams, Pitch black“.
"It looks like a fairy world"~Meg from Little Women by Louisa May Alcott
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