@mineralizedwritings
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Great idea!! I may add in Aloth. He’s the villain from my Refined Duology. He’s absolutely terrible. I don’t quite know his motive yet. 😅 I guess I’ll figure it out once I start writing him into the castle.
“Maybe we should start over…” the blonde young woman tapped her chin. “So, you’re Amidala, You’re E…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Thanks so much for the feedback!! I’m really glad you enjoyed it!!
Yeah… I was a little on the fence about the kissing part, but I went with it anyway bc 1). I didn’t go into detail. 2). It’s supposed to be a bit Hallmark-y, if you know what I mean. 😅
I’m glad it made you laugh. After all, that was the point! 😁 Thanks fo…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings sounds good!! Also I really want Paxton and Luna to meet Matthew and them sometimes, so maybe when/if the dragons roars they’ll hear it too?
Also…I just realized/remembered that Luna has some trauma relating to Dragons!
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Esther started the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @arien @starofthenorth @felicity @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @anyone_please!!
Hey, everybody!!
So, I wrote a short story for my grandparents for Christmas. It’s supposed to be cheesy. I need all the feedback and critique I can get, please!!! A…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ok so it’s hard to keep track… but I think Milo (and Cammie?) are with the dragon rn too. (that right @theloonyone ?) Oh and feather and crosshair are there too.
Trying to help us stay organized with who is where, also because we have split the groups to make them easier to manage, maybe only tag the people your…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
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whaley started the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey y’all! So, I’m fixing up my very first story idea, because my tween past self would love that ❤ The hero’s a young boy, thirteen to fourteen years old, with green eyes and white hair, mixed with these orange-gold feathers. His clothing color scheme is deep rose, purple and mustard (all the rich colors). Personality-wise, he is kind of…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @starofthenorth @arien @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
HEYA!!! So….
How would y’all feel….if I decided to write a short novella or whatever about my charries during the holiday season in A’Grend?
I’m thinking it would be a book of short stories from diff…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
So, I can’t post the next chapter(s) right now, bc there are some things in it I’ve been meaning to edit. But I will post it here later today!! 😄
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Carmen
“Uh, th-thank you f-f-for ask-ing th-though,” Matthew stuttered. He smiled nervously and Carmen smiled back.
“Of course,” she said, leaning against the wall next to him. “I’m actually kinda freaked out too. I mean, that was a dragon. I thought they were extinct!” She sighed, her eyes distant, no l…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
So sorry I’m just now replying! I agree that Afterthoughts definitely makes me want to read your book. I did have one suggestion though, I’m sorry it’s late . . . What about Aftermath? Of course, I don’t know your whole plot but aftermath seems to describe more how your book is about the world after it’s been destroyed. I d…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin Oh man, Carmen coming over there is just gonna…well you’ll see 😂.
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @esther-c @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyonMatthew
“Who are you?!” Lyla shouted.
“Quite a lot of fire for such a little girl,” the voice rumbled. “Who am I? The humans used to call me Aurivis, if that is what you mean…[Read more] -
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@felicity @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @arien @starofthenorth @arien @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-here
Gonna just leave this name right here *smirks*
Brenven Kader: Bren means Flame (or prince), Ven means Of, Kader means Fate, Destiny or Power.
Flame of Destiny
Flame of Power
*Looks glaringly at those who know who…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
ALSO…
@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @keilah-h @esther-c
Umm could yall give a basic rundown of what ur Charries look like and such? XD I already kinda know Everton, Amidala, Tauren and Lesli, but the others….not so much XD
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Felicity replied to the topic I'm making a comeback babyyyy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Love your selected genres. Sounds like just about anything could happen in it so…
Working off @mineralizedwritings genius idea, how about the fountain isn’t a water fountain, but an odorless, clear poison fountain? (there’s your horror element).
If you wanted to do talking animals and the waffle house, you could write it from…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
yall…I really wanna get back into the castle…. But idk how because all of my charries are with Freedoms….and she’s gone rn….and….IDK WHAT TO DO SOB!!!
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 Ok, good night!
@mineralizedwritings That was a really cool description of Aurivis! I think Carter’s reaction is going to be very similar to Tauren’s.
@esther-c @keilah-h @theloonyone
Carter
The huge green eye shifted from person to person. Carter froze, staring at the slit pupil and the scaled skin.
No way. It’s a drago…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
So, as a girl who had to completely SPLIT her first book into two books, I am with you in whatever you do girl!!! I GOT YOUR BACK!!! *dramatic anime fist pump XD*
In all seriousness, I too have had major plot upheavals before, the biggest being when I realized that my first book in my series, which actually would’ve been the…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
So cool your name means Ruler of Elves!! And that’s great your pastor likes LOTR. (best fandom EVER!)
Arien means . . . well, it’s from Quenya, the Elvish language invented by Tolkien. I’m not sure what it means, but Arien is the Maiden of the Sun. She essentially rides in the sun as it travels around the earth. 🤣Sounds like…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic I'm making a comeback babyyyy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@felicity
Aw, I’m so happy that KP helped gave you what you were looking for! It’s awesome to have you as a part of the community. 🙂As for the genre, I’m thinking more slice-of-life modern-day with some fantasy, mystery, and maybe even a bit of paranormal/horror elements added in the mix as well.
I want it to feel both grounded and heartfelt…[Read more]
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