@mineralizedwritings
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
oh yay, it’s time for Dante and the twins drama. I need to put their older versions in a rp at some point so I can actually write them as friends lol
Ellie
As soon as the three boys entered the room, Eddie’s face darkened.
“Dante.” She growled.
“Uh oh.” Ellie breathed.
Dante gave a crooked smile. “Hey, Eddie. Ellie. Glad t…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
this is the first fanfic I’ve done anything on in weeks XD
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I have an idea that started today that’s living rent-free in my head…may never make it onto paper, but I’m just gonna rant about it here bc I want to XD
House of Heroes; led by Duke Nicholas Joseph Furion, a noble who seeks to bring peace to the land: white, blue, and yellow.
Holds the northern part of the land, the largest portion, full of…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h
OK! Here we go!
Everton
The figure who looked most like a man let out a deep laugh. “Attack? I could break every bone in your body without using a weapon, human.” The man—who Ev could now tell had blue skin—lowered the spear he held. Adrian stepped out from the around the corner, shooting Ev a disapproving glare.…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Totally okay! I get you😂 I haven’t RPed in like… *mentally calculates, and gives up because of my awful concept of time* at least a month or something
And if you need me to RP something random to get things started again just lemme know!
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae Hiiiiiiiii!!!
First off, your descriptions are absolutely FABULOUS, girl!! Like, I can see this scene so much <3
and now for your questions…
- Not at all! I think it’s a good length for a scene!
- nope, I don’t think so!
- Yessssss, very much so! I really loved the body language and it really conveyed Nahim’s feelings/emotions/fears…
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h
I’m sorry it’s been an eternity since I’ve RPed!! 😭 I’ll try my best to get the next RP written and posted this afternoon. I should have time. (Not that I didn’t have time before… I was just being lazy… XD)
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ahhhh, I’m backkkk. Sorry it’s been like f o r e v e r 😭 I have no good excuse except procrastination, lol. XDD
Fynn
“Awesome.” Fynn grinned, rubbing his hands together. “Then into the dark we go.” He dramatically turned on his heel and led them out of the classroom. “The hallways are spooky in the dark.” Fynn wasn’t sure why…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 6 months ago
That’s a lot more code than last time I tried to post a pic….
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Esther replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 6 months ago
Aaaaannnnddddd…. Nerp
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Esther replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 6 months ago
Test, test…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Rae actually asked this same question a while back, and what she told you is basically what I would’ve said. Koshka’s advice was really good too. So yeah, I basically have nothing else to add. I feel like they covered everything I can think of. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ooh we did!! We were right in the path of totality. It was amazing!! Definitely unforgettable! I don’t even know how to describe it. Because the lighting kept getting funky, it was a little eerie, until it got as dark as it is right when the sun dips below the horizon. It’s so cool!!
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Helloooo, I’m heeeeere
1. Feels like average length to me! Then again it isn’t in book format on KP, and is one continuous page, so I may be gauging it incorrectly. I think if it’s 2-3 pages long on your document, that feels adequate.
2. If it’s the end of a chapter, it works as a summary. If not, I don’t think it’s too abrupt to have in…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Maybe they have to find a special macguffin in the middle of this fairy tale land, that will effectively send them back home? Like Oz? And creatures keep attacking them to protect the special artifact? Just spitting ideas here lol.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
There are at least five good teachers tho! There’s Mr. Gregory ofc. Then there’s the art teacher with the red and yellow scarf, Miss Soleil, and the two dance instructors with a romance subplot.
…Granted, I created all of these characters XD But nice adults are underrated in fiction and deserve screentime.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae does he use “bullets” as an exclamation? That’s hilarious.
Jaylen
Someone barged in as she tried to figure out what exactly was going on.
“Freeze! Wait…are you a Fettian?! I thought I was the only one around here! Bullets, another Fettian ruining my fun. Well, don’t say I’m breaking any rules at any point in time cuz I’m not despite p…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed I will not be mad at you for torturing a beloved character. I’ll be mad at the ones torturing him, but not at you.
I do the same way too much. Just two days ago, I was listening to video game character death screams extracted from their games and imagining what circumstances in an actual linear story situation would…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @grcr thank y’all so much!! It means a lot to me that y’all would read the scene and offer some thoughts 💖💖💖
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @joy-calle @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lol
Sooooo I’m currently working on a scene for one of my novels…and I need some advice😅
The two MCs of this novel have both been imprisoned by Soviet Forces (this is 1950s East Germany, btw) for being involved in the underground church.
It’s…[Read more]
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