MineralizedWritings

@ellette-giselle

I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.

I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?

@whalekeeper

Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

@hybridlore

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

Dystopian classic. *Sighs emphatically* I remember reading one of the plot twists as a nervous little thirteen-year-old and freaking out. Really good book.

@ellette-giselle

It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.

I don’t know… I like Don. 😅 And Jonathan.

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

Hehe unintentional pun

I have a mystery story idea but absolutely no clue how to write a mystery:(

@ellette-giselle

It worked!

I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.

Great job!

@godlyfantasy12

Godlyyyy

You’re here, madam ghost. I see you on the Currently Active bar.

@ellette-giselle

They’re not showing up on the link for me.

@liberty

Gotcha.

@keilah-h

Fr. I don’t want characters to agree with me all the time, because then there would be nothing to think about.

@whalekeeper

Life be like that sometimes.

lol

@whalekeeper

Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life.

ehhh that’s characters in morally compromised settings for ya though.

Even your absolute favorite will most likely always, always say something that you don’t quite agree with if their plot has to do with them dealing with, or being, questionable people.

@ellette-giselle

Wait what? You mean you don’t use spell check for the other book and still manage to have something readable?!

I didn’t know other writers couldn’t spell until I joined KP. XD I’ve rarely needed spell check. But my handwriting is horrible, and people can’t read it, so the skills balance out.

@linus-smallprint

I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint thanks!

It’s a shame we can’t comment yet. I have some good ones.

@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!

@theducktator

Thanks! And yes, bio stands for biology! And I think bio is kinda easy ngl….  XD

Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?

I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?

@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁