RainyEmily

@nova21 Of course! Anytime!

@hallie-jean @nova21 These look fantastic!

@writerlexi1216

I ADORE this chapter soooooo much!!!!! Like WHERE do I even begin????

1. YESS!!!! Your characters are soooooo awesome!!!!! Deek’s probably my fav. Just saying. XD

2. YES!!! I’d HAVE to keep on reading ’cause there’s just soooo many questions and I NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!

3. The pacing is PERFECT!!! I LOOOOVED this second chapter…[Read more]

@nova21

Aww, girl, you’re ABSOLUTELY 100% WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a pleasure to be able to read that first chapter!!!!! I enjoyed it soooooo much!!!! Oooh, YEA!!! That’d be really cool!!!!!! You’re soooo welcome, Ella!!!!!!!!! <333

@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @e-k-seaver, @daisy-torres, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @abigail-m, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @writerlexi1216, @jenwriter17, @godlyfantasy12, @hallie-jean, @ribbonash, @wyn-rose

Hey everyone!!  I just want to thank you all for your tips/input/reading/offering-to-read/etc. and I want you to know how much I appreciate…[Read more]

@nova21 I just finished reading your chapter and left some feedback in the document. Thanks for sharing it! I really enjoyed it! 😀

Personally, when I see a cast of characters page it worries me that the cast is so large that the reader needs help to keep them all straight (when there are so many characters, I have a hard time connecting to the story sometimes). But I dunno, that’s just me…

@writerlexi1216 Of course! I remember when I was writing my first novel too, haha…long time ago. Oh, the memories…good luck!

@nova21 Eyy sorry this took so long but I finally finished your chapter! I really like your setup, and I really want to know the overall story! Keep writing, girl!

@writerlexi1216 Just finished it! Left a few notes here and there. I think you did good! Caira is quite interesting, and I would like to find out more! I think that the pacing is good for a novel.

Can’t wait to see more!

@joy-caroline

Girl, this was INCREDIBLE!!!!!! I LOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!!!! You’re very talented at this!!!!!!! <333

@gracie-j

Well, I know for me, if there’s a lot of characters in a story a cast list really helps me keep track of who is who. Normally, cast lists don’t spoil anything for me ’cause I’m someone who only reads it when a character shows up a second time and I don’t remember who he/she was. So you could put it at the end of your book, and it could…[Read more]

@gracie-j For manga I read usually the authors put one character profile after each chapter or so. For myself I usually put a list after the story/section (see link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/abluvion_14214021505660705/cast-of-characters_48658453379471721)

I usually try not to spoil the story, if they are important before but have some…[Read more]

I’m not able to beta read right now, but I’ll tag some more people @seekjustice @rochellaine @alia @valtmy @gracie-j @nova21 @issawriter17 @godlyfantasy12

Name: Linyang

Tag: @devastate-lasting

Experience: Inexperienced, but I’ve done things such as judging short story contests and other things

Style: Somewhere in between Gummy Worm and Dark Chocolate

Brainstorming-ness: I’m way better at line-editing, ngl, so 2 or 3?

Time: A couple of hours, make two or three weeks.

Word count: I prefer…[Read more]

for those of you who read my chapter, I changed Midhael’s name to Malia, because the original one was amazing in my twelve-year old head, but really hard to pronounce, lol!!

So this one is Malia’s:

@gracie-j Thank you! I hope so too!

@hallie-jean Lol I actually know nothing about my characters and only make aesthetics to develop them. So you go, girl!

Beautiful collages everyone!!!!!!!!!!

Here’s one for Aven’s BFF, Grove:

@writerlexi1216

YES, YES, YESSSSSS it’s HERE!!!!!!!!! *jumps up and down* I cannot wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!! I’ll probably be able to get to it tomorrow morning!!! It’s gonna be sooo hard to have to wait until I get a spare moment, but as soon as I do, Imma heading o’er here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *jumps up and down* *my family gives me…[Read more]