Michelle Black

@michelle Sorry for the delay, But here are my thoughts!

I like how each of the friends, Freddy, Eddy, Al, and Hilda all have unique personalities. I love it when kid’s books have good friendships. I also liked how each chapter had its own little theme, and I also liked the humor!

My biggest critique would be that the stories are much more K…[Read more]

I totally see what you mean:) the rats need to have a mention in one of the other stories, Because like you said we never hear of them again *gives you a gold medal* that is a great piece of feedback. Let me tell you the story of how this book started, I always wanted to write a children’s book since I was little but when I tried, nothing worked n…[Read more]

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Just about finished reading it! I will give you my feedback soon.

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Sure, that would be great!! Though, I would rather not post my email on a public forum if that’s the way to get it.

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Is Freddy and Friends your book?

@michelle That’s great! Thanks!

@michelle Sweet 😀

Do you think it’s publishable? Definitely!

Does it keep your interest? Yep! My only minor suggestion would be to make the rats pop up a little more in the story. They’re kind of just in there for the first chapter and then never mentioned again, which to me felt kinda awkward … but that might just be me being overly picky…[Read more]

@michelle Hey! I finished your book; it was really sweet! Quick question: where do you want me to answer the feedback questions? On here, or on the book doc itself in the comments or something?

@michelle That’s so awesome! I’d be happy to read it! 😀 (My email’s warrenluther04@gmail.com 🙂 )

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Same! Science fiction is the genre that I would like to write a novel in but haven’t written in yet.

Mixing sci-fi with fantasy sounds really cool! There are endless cool story ideas that can come out of that combination of genres. But yeah, I’m on the same boat as you and haven’t yet thought of a plot idea.XD

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I found out about Story Embers and KP through YDUbs, haha :))

Wrong guess, I’ve never watched a single one of the Marvel movies.

I actually hand make cards too–for grown-ups XD I love calligraphy.

I look as Irish as a dog looks like a cat, so I’m there with you. I always wanted red hair, but it would look awful on me, haha.

I’ve…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting I haven’t really read or watched any manga or anime, at least not through a whole series. I mostly just like the art style; one of my friends taught it to me awhile back and I just kind of picked it up.

@michelle That’s awesome!

@leon-fleming Hey, I’m late too (o_0; )
Yeah, probably. I think they explained it on one of the SE…[Read more]

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Awesome! Looking forward to it.

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Here’s my email!

Kathleenramm@icloud.com

Congratulation @michelle! And of course I’d love to read it!

Is this the first chapter book you’ve written, or have you written others as well?

@michelle Ooh, what’s it about? Congratulations on finishing it!

@michelle Ah congrats! I’d be glad to, if I can find the time.