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@grcr  @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Yeah i just tried and the green bar thingy loads but then it goes away and nothing happens. I’ve hit refresh multiple times but it doesn’t work 🙁

@grcr

I tried a half-hour ago and it still doesn’t work :(((

@savannah_grace2009

Oof… Have you tried recently?

It started working again… so it should load now…

@grcr

I can’t add a pfp either ever since i joined!!

@whalekeeper

😊

Evander

He laughed a little. “Oh, that was no big deal…. Nice to meet you, Gus.”

His mind replayed the first several hours of his day, and terror covered his face for a short minute.

“Well, I… I swam here, to say the least. A pack of small fox-like dog-ish beasts would’ve destroyed me… jumping into the deep ocean was…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

(lol… 😏 )

Evander

“Oh…well, um…”

He looked off again, and then back at Gus.

Why am I so nervous… I’m never nervous… 

“I… well, I go by Evander–at least, thats what they call me where I come from anyway.”

He turned his head and shoulders and stared off into the distance for a second.

“….w–what’s your name?”

@keilah-h

(🧐 I’m not sure why the tag didn’t work… ^^ )

@whalekeeper @keilah-h

(are we saying Gus and Evander have come in full contact? If not… well… heh heh)

Evander

Evander’s ears perked up, and he intently looked at the creature in front of him…

He had never seen anything like it before.

Evander let out a slight laugh. “Well… thanks…. I guess…”

He sat down and waved his tail s…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen

Thank you so much💗 That made my day!

@keilah-h @whalekeeper

I’m sooo sorry I’m late…

@lydibug

You’re welcome! ☺️

Evander

His eyes locked onto a small lizard-like creature. He stared at it in amusement, and began walking over to it.

A noise somewhere close made him freeze. Despite being a large tiger, he was scared.

Evander looked around. He didn’t like things s…[Read more]

Oh, and since you have the characters and plot figured out (How did I not see that??🤣) Just make sure Its to to elaborate and complicated and you add lots of details and description!

@esther-c

How fun! I have written a ton of plays when I lived in a neighborhood with a lot of kids even one about the board game “Clue.” I still write some now to preform when I see them all again, my longest being around 17 pages. I can try to help you out, 🙂 I think some good tips would to have everyone have around equal lines, if they want.…[Read more]

@lydibug

Oh! That picture is soo cute! 😍

Evander

Crouching as he moved, Evander slowly took a few steps forward, looking thoroughly around for movements beyond his own.

He looked towards the ocean for a brief second, then blinked at the sky, and took several more steps forward.

He used his sharp sense of hearing—which he rarely used for anything except hunting—to listen for any…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks! 😀

@trailblazer @light-warrior-pen @hybridlore @freedomwriter76

Here it is!

Before I could think any further, I collapsed on a bed, and fell asleep. I had a dream, one that filled me with pure happiness. It was the story of how my parents met. The story was told many times and each time, mom could not ever stop laughing and dad still felt a little…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Good job! That’s so exciting!!

@smiley

I’m not sure maybe anything between 3 and 4? When I finish writing I will definitely fix it up though 🙂

@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c

Thank you!

@thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper

Okay thanks Whaley! And yes number 1 is Rishona.