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@ellette-giselle

Nice! You hyphenated firstborn though, which is one word.

@rae

I’m glad you had fun! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!🥳🥳🥳

@hybridlore

I filled out your feedback form!

@rae that’s awesome you got to have fun with your friends! Happy birthday!

@keilah-h I’m going to get so depressed if I try to answer that question lol

@whalekeeper :((((

Also, apparently I haven’t shared the mock cover yet!! (At least in this forum) Here it is! (At the end of the story XD)

Also…

Look! I found little Hallie!! 🥰

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.

Chapter 27

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@savannah_grace2009

Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️

OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTON

It’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn

It almost made me cry but…

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Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)

KP Connection Doc

@ellette-giselle

Two of my characters:

(MC guy just did something to save MC girl- his new bride- and it was super dangerous.)

girl: “ I don’t know if I want to kiss you or shove you off the bridge right now.”

Guy: “can I pick?”

I want to read that!

@ellette-giselle

It’s from the movie The Blues Brothers, which is absolutely hilarious. The full quote is “It’s 106 miles to Chicago, we got a full tank of gas, half a pack of cigarettes, it’s dark… and we’re wearing sunglasses.” XD

@whalekeeper

I’ve tried messaging through the Contact the Team page several times, and I have yet to receive a response. I have a friend I want to invite, but it seems pointless when no one seems to be able to get in. 🙁

@kathleenramm

Where are you???

@ellette-giselle

Thank you!

@whalekeeper

Praying.

Popping in again to let y’all know that I’m seeing all these prayer requests and praying for them! <33

@theshadow

This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve into the despair a bit more, but other than that everything is good.

Thank you!
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The soundtrack is epic.

I just watched The Blues Brothers for my brother’s birthday and it was hilarious. I want to watch it again. XD ‘

@esther-c

I’m so annoyed with Hallie right now. I get where she’s coming from, but still. 😒 So Katrina’s parents died with Antonio’s…I did not expect that. It explains why she’s so opposed to God. I love that scene at the end with Easton and Ruby. It’s adorable.🥰

How could they sit here, eating Tyler’s favorite meal, without him eating with t…

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