@magicalstories0611
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 Aw, I love Steve. He’s being all sweet and friendly despite everyone in the room distrusting him. ❤️
Eddie
Despite Adolphus’ assurances, the girl, Arabella, and the boy still seemed wary. Eddie tried her best to wipe the scowl off her face.
Why am I so moody? When’s the last time I slept? Th…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Something on the KP Trinity is a bit messed up… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 6 months ago
First of all, the whole KP Trinity thing looks AMAZING!!! And the art is EPIC!!!
*clears throat*
Anywho, for what I’m really creating this post for. XD
I noticed on the KP Trinity page that the words describing each part of it, weren’t in the boxes, they just kept going down the page until the words stopped. And the part where…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Magic systems!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I feel like I am more of a taking inspiration from history person because most of the things I do take end up being changed to fit the story and work differently from their real life versions. Usually I use the real history as a basis and then end up tweaking it a bunch. A good example is Laizha Brin. The original…
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Euodia replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
AWW thank you ❤️❤️❤️!! Yes I do too <3<3!! He’s soooo sweet. And my baby Asher!! I feel so bad for putting them through all this 😅😭. But it benefits them, in the end. 🙂
And yes, I will! I’m working on the next part right now actually! 🙂
AHH yes Asherrrrr ❤❤❤
Okay goo…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Drawings from the Dragon in the forum Art 3 years, 6 months ago
These look epic! Is this for anyone’s dragon art? Or do you want this reserved for your portfolio?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Magic systems!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Wow! The depth to your world’s history is amazing! I notice a lot of events that could be pinpointed as particular allegories to real world events. Would you consider yourself more of an allegorical writer, or just drawing inspiration from real world history (as you would need to either way)? Do you want to make particular…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Thank you ❤️❤️!! Yeah, Dylan hasn’t really had it sunk in yet until the scene after this one, which I’ll post if you want (once I write it lol), and he’s just reeling. Everything happens so fast and once he’s got a moment to just think…well, it’s so shocking for him, understandably. And poor Asher is just going through the s…
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yeah, you explained it well. I love the idea of them covering themselves with their wings!
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h @theloonyone Oh, and I forgot to say, I’m pulling Aurivis out. He was getting kinda hard and boring to write because he doesn’t fit in the castle and I still don’t know how his magic works. I might write a short thing later about him coming back to his own world.
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I love all the difference fae, this is so cool! I kinda want to draw a dryad now… What do the kobolds look like?
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Simon (Beth’s brother and Carter and Carmen’s friend) got a concussion. He might just heal miraculously, though, because I’m kinda getting bored of him sleeping so much XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Beth
Everyone was suddenly back together again, plus one extra. Beth eyed the dark-haired newcomer warily as she stood up.
“What did you find?” She said, turning her attention back to Crosshair. “And does anyone here even have any medical experience?”
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Light replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oops, I mean the Shal’le 🤦 Sorry! XD
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Light replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Girl…
That scene…
Was…
AMAZING!!!! 🤩
I really enjoyed reading it and it kept me on the edge of my seat! Can’t wait to see what happens next!!! 😃✨
Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️
AHHH!!!! Dylan, Asher!!! That was so good girl!!!…
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Ah sorry girl! I probably won’t be on much the next day or two, tomorrow is my birthday and I’m going to be gone for a lot of the day. And yes, I think it’s your turn to split up the groups! 🙂
Also, is it my turn to RP as Vance?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Your welcome!!! Thanks! linguistics is always really fun to think about!
Yeah, that makes sense, there’s some really cool art out there!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Sorry if I’m a bit late to the conversation, but I love your world! Your races gives me a lot of DnD vibes. Do you draw from that at all? I really like the culture, and the Jewish inspiration is cool! If your still not sure about greeting phrases, here’s my take. What is something these people value deeply. You’ve mentioned that…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Book needs some help 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Alrighty! 👍 😀
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
oh, just finished it!
Woo-hoo!! 😄 XD
XDXD This is literally my oc’s Tauren and Lesli. She’s been doing that to him since he was little and won’t stop now that he’s a foot taller than her lol. ( I mean if he asked her to she probably would)
That’s awesome!! 🤣
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Sorry I took so long to respond.
I love this! You can see the turmoil that both Dylan, and Vance seem to be going though in this scene, though Vance’s is more subtle. Vance cares for this boy, but he’s cruel, and wants to turn him into the monster he is, because that’s what he believes it means to be a man. Can’t wait to hear…[Read more]
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