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@jonas

I really like this! The main thing I haven’t heard about yet is the characters. Is it going to play out in a similar way to Stormlight, where the characters at random points come across their abilities? I really like Krenna as well, but she seems highly resonant to both Shallan and Steven Leeds (I don’t know if you’re aware of the latter,…[Read more]

@anyone

I would like to revive this forum. Something that I have wondered about for a while now has to do with the necessity of the holly ghost in the trinity. I myself am non-trinitarian, but I was curious on what any of y’alls thoughts were on it if you have any.

@jonas

Sorry, I haven’t been on for a while, allow me to quickly express my thoughts here and there form when I’ve last been here.

I would be open to extended elements, but I worry that it would be more cliche than just the four Greek elements. I at one point had a draft for a lightning element, but I couldn’t think of anything interesting to d…

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@fernweh_grace

Hmm, so my worldbuilding is pretty solid, and very real for me, because I literally have places based off of real things. For example, I have an underground trade city in the Nevari Desert that is directly based off of Derinkuyu, Cappadocia. I have a whole tribe that has ties to the Basotho, geographically, and culturally, and I…

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@freedomwriter76

I totally understand your concern.

I’d say that in the first chapter that’s in his POV, showcase his positive character traits, but also give us a glimpse into his internal conflict so we see that he isn’t as perfect as he seems on the outside. Slowly revealing his backstory like you said you’d do will also help readers start t…[Read more]

Well, not free. Max needs a subscription.

You could always just find it for free on some sketchy website instead lol

@calyhuge

Ok I like that. Calligripho sounds cool.
@euodia-vision @whalekeeper

Lois

“A wonderful world, I must say.”

Felicity jumped to her feet in surprise and reached for her hip where her knives were normally slung. The boy who had spoke did not seem to mind. He slipped past her, joined their little circle, and opened a book.

“Would you l…[Read more]

*insert Christian swear words* pictures aren’t working again >:(

@whalekeeper

It’s free on Max (used to be called HBO Max idk why they changed it)

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr

Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!

(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)

(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Hello! Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy and am currently working on a universe with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

What does Calligripho look like? I’m imagining an old dude in a wizard hat, but I’m probably way off.

@whalekeeper

Awww, I love thisss!! 🥰

Oh yesss, I really need to get back into this!!

@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009

😱 I wrote almost the whole RP and then accidentally tapped on one of the links at the bottom of the page and lost it! 😭 I don’t think I have time to rewrite the whole thing now, but I promise I’ll have it posted later today or tomorrow. 😅

@Freedomwriter76

You’re sooo welcome girl!!! 💗💗

And LIGHT, OH MY GOSHHHHH, THAT MADE ME SMILE SO MUCH THIS MORNING!!!! TELL YOUR LITTLE BROTHER THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHHHHHHH!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

AWWWW I’M SO GLAD!!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I did and showed him your post and he smiled and said to tell you you’re welcome 🥰🥰

And girlll…ugh that mood board…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Yeah you can join. You might encounter a few other characters eves-dropping outside. Apparently our conversations are pretty interesting XD

@euodia-vision

Well that’s a pretty epic story. Hope those stings heal soon!

@whalekeeper

O.O

I thought that was a typo

Are you OKAY??

*blinks* Nope, no typo.

I am okay now!

Tuesday… not so much. XD

Long story short my four siblings and I were working for a neighbor, tearing out lath and plaster in their upstairs. One brother screwed a piece of wood over the only exit due to not wanting to get rubble in their…[Read more]