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@theshadow

This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve into the despair a bit more, but other than that everything is good.

Thank you!
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The soundtrack is epic.

I just watched The Blues Brothers for my brother’s birthday and it was hilarious. I want to watch it again. XD ‘

@esther-c

I’m so annoyed with Hallie right now. I get where she’s coming from, but still. 😒 So Katrina’s parents died with Antonio’s…I did not expect that. It explains why she’s so opposed to God. I love that scene at the end with Easton and Ruby. It’s adorable.🥰

How could they sit here, eating Tyler’s favorite meal, without him eating with t…

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@whalekeeper

Rallascant

“Rallascant Cottontail, at your service.”

He gave a small bow, and tipped an imaginary hat. Then he straightened.

“Well, I’d better hop off then. If you ever need help, just call.”

And with a wink, the imp was gone.

@elishavet-pidyon

Hi I know I should be working on my actual wip, but role playing is less scary

Lois

Lois blinked. It was the only expression visible on his typically deadpan face.

“I don’t remember,” he responded.  He paused, seemingly looking for the right words, before asking, “But did you ever get into fights with your imaginary friend?”

@rae

Praying for him.

@hybridlore @ruth @elishavet-pidyon

Thank you! Mom and I went to Ohio to visit this week. Grandma is still in the hospital, but she’s eating solid food now and the hope is that she will be moved to a rehab center this week. Her movement is limited, but she was able to sit in a chair and she is now off of oxygen. We’re…[Read more]

*disappears again*

*crawls out of my hidey hole*
*drops art*

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 24

Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.

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@theshadow

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.

Thank you so much!!

A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…

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@the_lost-journal

😂😂😂 I wouldn’t edit like that. I can’t draw. XD Other reasons too of course. XD

@rae

I’m impressed that you managed that. I could maybe do eight hours, but not 12.

My grandma was in a bad car accident today. It was a front collision at 50-60 mph, but other than that, we don’t really know anything about the crash itself. My grandma is in the emergency room with a fractured elbow and some broken ribs. She should recover without needing surgery, but prayers would be appreciated.

@ellette-giselle

I’m going to be in Chicago from Wednesday till Sunday, and we aren’t bringing the laptops, so I’m going to disappear for a few days. I’ll catch up when I return.

@hybridlore

I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off

Same. 🙁