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@esther-c

OoOoOo!!! I am very intrigued!

So are the two characters you introduced inspired by… middle-eastern culture?

And I would love to hear more! I’m fine with spoilers. XD

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

*quietly watches from the sidelines*

I love WWII and I’m loving this so far.

*materializes out of nowhere*

@whalekeeper

Ik this is a bit off-topic from what you guys are talking about but seriously, I just watched Guardians of the Galaxy Volume III – and it is the best and no one can take Rocket away from me, he is KING

YES. That movie was the BEST. I think a lot of my space comic is inspired by it. And I love Rocket so m…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Well, the Traitor normally specializes in the UNIT and has virtually nothing to do with the prison block, so he’s like the lead scientist. Good idea about the scars, I might use that, because since he doesn’t go to the prison block, like you said, how would she know? And yeah, I was kind of going for that he goes around to mak…

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@lydibug

Lol I just realized that Chloe was the one who threw the shoe during the fight XD   I think that was my favorite part of that whole scene.

Also, btw, the girls are really short. Like hobbit sized (3 feet).

What does Chloe look like?

Eddie 

Ed’s eyes sparkled. “Dress shopping? Everyone??”

She turned halfway around, tail whippin…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*gasps*

I love this idea!!!

That would be so hard for a mother thought to see her son go through all of that. 😭 And Bucky, after thinking she died, sees her again?? AH my heart.

But now I can see her just be such a mother to all the broken Avengers

YES!

There! Finally! It posted!

Part 3:

However, I think the reveal would be a lot more powerful if you set us up for it earlier on in the chapter. I didn’t know before hand that he always had his helmet on. I kinda just imagined him as a normal dude with a normal human face. I think including a description of him, his outfit, and especially his helmet, and then mentioning t…[Read more]

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

Ughhh the part 2 won’t post

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

However, I think the reveal wou…[Read more]

@rae

Um this post isn’t working so I’m going to send it in two parts to see if that helps.

Part 1:

I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:

This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it…[Read more]

@rea

I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:

This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it that way. There’s obviously nothing wrong with using italics. It kinda looks cooler, actually.…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Finally finished reading! I’m loving the characters. That last one with the toad was adorable.

Oh and if you want to know spoilers, I will gladly indulge. XD Plus, Amir has a love interest if anyone wants to hear about that… 🥰

Arsyn Dabir’s moodboard…

Amir’s moodboard…

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @spinner4him @smiley @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper @anyone-else-that-might-be-interesed

Ok… I’m so excited because I’m finally sharing my WIP idea for NaNo!!!

I think it’s the only WIP that I’ve actually put a lot of thought into before actually…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Ooooh, what is this NaNo WIP???

Wellll…

I won’t explain it all now because I’m planning to share more about it later today. So I’ll tag you then. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yeah, that’s a really good idea! I’ll have to keep that in mind. 🙂