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@princesachronicle22

Glad I could help! :))

@esther-c

Oooh, I love romantic side plots XD

XD Sammmeeee, I’m a total sucker

You could also toss in some conflict and have the guy meet her with bad intentions, like to figure out how to make Vital or steal it, etc. But then he ends up liking her. I feel like that trope is kinda overused, but if it’s done well, it doesn’t bother me.

I like Loo…

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And you could totally play with his backstory like why he chooses or has to fight as a gladiator when he’s just this super nice guy

@princesachronicle22

Oooh, I love romantic side plots XD

You could also toss in some conflict and have the guy meet her with bad intentions, like to figure out how to make Vital or steal it, etc. But then he ends up liking her. I feel like that trope is kinda overused, but if it’s done well, it doesn’t bother me.

I like Loopy’s idea too.…[Read more]

@anyone

Okay I had one idea that is kinda random but it’s there.

He could be this Gladiator who fights for entertainment, who looks all fierce in the ring, but then in reality is this perfect gentleman and all sweet and always apologizes to his opponents after he fights them. And he and the MC meet before one of his matches and then she’s like”…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Aww, I love that!! Siblings dynamics are the best. XD

@theducktator

That sounds very inconvenient to live under. No wonder your characters want to get out. Does just the Orb shrink, or does everything inside it shrink too?

Oh yes, very inconvenient 😑 lol

Just the Orb itself

I’m terrified that by the time I get to experience 4 feet of snow I’ll be too old to enjoy it. XD

Lol! For real XD

@freed_and_redeemed

Umm… my immediate answer would be Leon. I find him more relatable in a general sense and for some reason I just love him more. XD I wish I could give you more of a complete answer, lol. I guess I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said.

And that scene….

Girl!!! They’re smuggling Bibles together?!! I love that!! 😆

@freed_and_redeemed @stephie

Thanks!! 🥰

It was because i saw a pic of a girl riding piggyback with a guy and I was like, “I need to put this in my book!” XD

@loopylin

Thanks! No that’s great!

He could possibly be from outside the city, but it would be difficult

But I definitely like the idea of him not knowing or caring about her making Vital! And it could be something she worry’s about or has dealt with in the past. A ‘you only care about the money’ situation.

@princesachronicle22

Ok, well I’m definitely no expert on this, but I will try to help.

I think he should probably be someone from outside the city, because that would then make her curious and maybe ask him things about what it’s like outside. Also, I think it would be important that he either doesn’t know or doesn’t care that Nikari  can ma…[Read more]

@trailblazer

That was so sweet! I love sibling relationships. And I tell one of my brothers he needs to take a shower all the time. 😂

@magicalstories0611

Oooohhh love it Ry!!

I haven’t read through the whole thing yet but I will come back later, because I wanna know more!

(actually we’ve spent more time on the characters and world than the actual writing).

Think you’ve just summed up the entirety of an aspiring author’s process  😂. But figuring that stuff out befo…[Read more]

@magicalstories0611

Thanks! I’m glad that helped!

@stephie

And here is a list of favorite books. It was too long to put in the first post. 😂

Freddy the Pig
Harry Potter
Alcatraz vs. the Evil Librarians
The Stormlight Archive
Tress of the Emerald Sea
Lord of the Rings
The Hobbit
Chronicles of Narnia
CS Lewis’ Space Trilogy
Wingfeather Saga
Out of Time series
An Unwilling Guest
Little Women s…[Read more]

@stephie

Hello! I have never had lemon juice on pancakes before. I do love maple syrup on lemon yoghurt pancakes though. I am definitely a night owl. I am regularly up past midnight reading. I have a lot of favorite authors, including L. M. Montgomery, Louisa May Alcott, Walter R. Brooks, Brandon Sanderson, Nadine Brandes, Jill Williamson,…[Read more]

@magicalstories0611

Hmm. Maybe she could have the power to heal people, but also to hurt people? Like she could take away their pain/illness by putting it in a jar or something, but than be able to easily infect/hurt people with it? Or maybe she could create food from nothing, but because of this she could also poison people really easily? Or if…[Read more]

@magicalstories0611

Ooh, trauma! XD Anyway. Do you have a pattern for your character’s magic, or is it more like everyone just gets random powers because it fits them? And what kind of magic are you looking for for her?