@magicalstories0611
Active 1 year, 3 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Light replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
OH AND @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h cuz y’all were so excited about the Dietrich and Paxton comfort scene 😊
Thank you so much for remembering to tag me 😊!!
“I-I f…for…forg-g-g-give y…y…you.”
OMG THAT IS JUST PRECIOUS!!! UGHHH 😭❤️😭💔❤️!! I LUV PAXTON!!!!
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
AHHHH!!! I KNOWWWWWW!!!! I LOVE HIM NO…
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Carmen
“Any plans on what we should do once they find food?” Milo asked the group as they sat on the floor together.
“Well,” said Carter “I don’t know about you, but I’m planning on eating.”
Carmen smiled and nudged her brother’s shoulder. “You know that’s not what he m…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @ava-blue @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @felicity @esther-c
I made another one for my charrie Lemonhead (same story as Eddie, Ellie, and Dante)

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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@e-m-trepke @theloonyone @sarafini
Simon
People toppled over each other like dominoes in front of Simon. What the heck is going on? He thought as he helped a girl he wasn’t sure he recognized to her feet. He braced himself against the wall and tried taking another step towards the door. The wind blew harder. Stupid wind. He thought, Every tim…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
Sam! He’s the best. The board looks really good 💕
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I figured. 😉 @sarafini and I will take it slow so we don’t get super fare ahead.
Thanks! RPing is already helping with character development! 🙂
And we should totally have Fynn and Nyx meet! (I haunted the forum before I joined, so ur totally right about them getting along!)
Everton
Ev took a few steps to catch up…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
That works! You can go ahead and write a RP if you’d like. I may not be able to write more tonight, but I will be able to tomorrow for sure!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-piyon @keilah-h @sarafini @wilder-w
Ok! Here’s the RP. This is the morning of the third day. I’ll have my charries bump into someone or something like that and any of y’all can choose which one of your characters it is. First come first serve. 😁
Amidala
Amidala marched up the steps of the s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah! I love Ami’s family too! I don’t like Ev’s family very much, as well. Well, at least his parents. They’re kind of terrible, but they all have to work some things out. Asher is a very mysterious character, I’ve found, so I’m still trying to understand him.
Lukas is my cinnamon roll, tho! 😊 His name means “brings lig…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @wilder-w
Hello!! So, before I write my RP, quick question: How many days have passed since the start of school?
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I remember you said that you already love Ev. So here’s his story!! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
You can start a thread with that question. Just press the community tab and choose the forum under which you want to put it. Then somewhere at the top there should be an option to “Create Topic”. I think that’s right.
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh, yes. You’re not wrong. I suppose it just depends how often it’s used.
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Esther replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
*nods head slightly* You as well. 😁 (You’re a throne warden, am I right?)
It did. It should get better, though… I hope 😜
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Thank you so much for the feedback! Super helpful! I’ve noticed that I do need to work on dialogue and character interaction more.
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Esther replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey!!
I LOVE WFS!!!
I would be a High Queen! 👑 And I think my older bro would make a great Throne Warden. My younger siblings wouldn’t quite fit their titles. Lol
I have watched the first episode and it is pretty good! It maybe could’ve been better, but I think it’s worth the watch. Can’t wait for the next one(s)!
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Gotcha 😉 I probably need more critique on my work anyway. I’ve only read it to a few of my cousins and my two younger siblings, so it’s always nice to get some critique that isn’t all positive bc it grows me as a writer and just as a person, tbh. 🙂
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Light replied to the topic Pray for this Family!! in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
I love your new tag. Amen! It reminds me of this quote from The Warden and the Wolf King by Andrew Peterson.
Thank you! A wise friend said that once.
“We face the enemy with steady hearts, for Dawn has conquered Dark since the Maker spoke the world. The night is deep, but light runs deeper.”
I LOVE that quote!! The Florid Sword said that…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
By the way, if you guys think anyone else would want to read it, please tag them. I may have forgotten some people 😅
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Now for the first 2 chapters!!!
Chapter 1
Amidala Nadir frowned. Something wasn’t quite right. She dipped her paintbrush in the pink paint and dabbed the canvas with the paint. She smiled. Perfect. She placed her painting supplies to the side and admired the flowers.
Pink roses… her favorite. They reminded her of hope. She peeked out the win…[Read more]
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