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@kyronthearcanin

Ok, so I love the young thief trope. 😂 (When it’s done right of course 😉 ) So I think Brycen might end up being one of my favorites. 😁

Yeah, I figured I’d have to move some stuff around once the drafting was done. But hey, I’ll just surprise myself and magically have double the chapters that way XD

Right? XD

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, so on chapter 2:

Interesting, I don’t think I have any major critiques or anything on this one. As for Nia, I wouldn’t call her a villain, though she is a minor conflict. I don’t think she’s overboard at all, she’s just not a very likeable character currently, so if that’s what you were aiming for, I think you did great!…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

I knew it. Yeah, go ahead!

And this is Lena! I despise her eyes, they’re just very creepy and look like they’re starring into the depths of your soul.

@everyone

I finished my friend’s other two characters.

So this is Finn! He was my favorite of the three, probably because I didn’t do his face. XD

@whalekeeper

Oh I love that!! Such a cute story! I want to know the next part!! 😀

And that last section…

What is an Elder? They are older than Ancient Ones, but not as ancient as the Old One.

XDXDXD That’s awesome. And I bet it made perfect sense to you back then, and now you’re just like “Oh my gosh. What in the world was I thinking?!”

XDXD

@princesachronicle22

Okay! It’s good with me! 😀

@godlyfantasy12

Okay! Sounds good 😊

@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

So I think I’m going to go ahead and throw in Kun’en if that’s okay with everyone?

@godlyfantasy12

Hey girl! So since Freedom won’t be on for a while, do you want to go ahead and RP? We could probably put in a few more characters if we need to, and then take them back out when Freedom gets back? Idk, just thinking out loud here. Or we could just take a break from this RP for a bit until she gets back?

What do u think?

@kyronthearcanin

Girl, this is so good!! I love it!! 😄

I would suggest separating the two POVs into separate chapters (so you’d have 4 chapters at this point), but you do whatever you want, because chapter length isn’t the most important thing when drafting. 😉

Looking forward to the next chapters!! 😀

@janellebelovedpig

I’m getting more intrigued as I read. I love where this is going! 😄

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

Ellie

“You may go and search out the disturbance. I will stay with the wounded one to make sure her injuries remain stable.” Silvia said.

Ellie didn’t need the blonde healer’s permission, but she nodded politely anyway and stood u…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Lol, I haven’t seen that show in years, but I remember enjoying it

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! I definitely was kind of experimenting with a lot of different things that I normally don’t do in my writing… Like prophecy, and more POVs than I’m used to. Throughout the next few chapters, more are added in, including the male POV. I think something I’ve also done is made a lot of the characters similar in persona…

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@whalekeeper

XD I love Ninjago, used to watch that show all the time

@awsumfaith I love Fynn and Nathaniel! I love pirate characters and am kinda surprised that I don’t have any myself. Also, Nathaniel having a crush on her is adorable.

@whalekeeper

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I love Dante

😂 Thank you. Also, is that a Lego ninjago pfp?

@felicity

(The definition of reality I’m using here is “the state of existing”. Just to be clear.) Perhaps there are two kinds of realities: the reality that has always been, (God), and the reality that He created, (time and space)?  Did God create reality? Is God reality, since He has created everything and has always existed?

If reality is sim…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Very intriguing! It captures a very classical fantasy vibe quickly with swords, prophecies… as well as dragons of course, I’m interested where you will take that. I will say that the pacing felt a little weird to me, not because your getting into it too quickly (I’m far worse with that), but because it felt like Kirah was too…[Read more]