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@trailblazer

I suppose that’s a working explanation. Where Christ is the solid, the Holy Spirit is the liquid, and Heavenly Father is gas, expressing the hierarchy of God’s physical manifestation. Both solid and liquid are confined to this earth, whereas gas can permeate through all of space. I like that explanation more than the egg one.

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@trailblazer

Yeah, I see what your getting at. It’s a reasonable enough explanation. Where your saying Christ and the Holy Spirit swapped places, and the Holy Spirit is the aspect of God that is enveloping the Earth.

So the Holy Ghost is specifically the spirit of Jesus Christ, while still being the same spirit as the Father in a grander sense,…[Read more]

@jonas

Ok, that makes sense. That would be quite a bit different then, and there would be a lot of intriguing pathways to explore with that, so I’m on board!

@jonas

I am aware of Legion, but I haven’t read it. I would say that the main thing that differentiates Krenna is that unlike either of those characters, these other personalities are somewhat real, and not figments of imagination resulting from a mental illness.

That’s a fair distinction. In regard to Legion specifically though, while it is the r…[Read more]

@jonas

This is really cool! I love all the characters already and the world building is awesome

@jonas

I do kind of want to keep fire, water, earth, and air.

Sounds good, just thought I’d point it out.

Celestiar mostly follows the rules of our universe, so in most cases, I don’t think I’m going to explain real natural phenomenon with magical rules I invented, so I don’t think that would be the case.

So if that’s the case, are the diffe…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I’m a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, and we believe that Heavenly Father, the Holy Ghost, and Jesus Christ are three distinct beings, though they are indeed one in purpose. (Please don’t burn me at the stake😅)

@trailblazer

Yeah, absolutely, that’s the mentality that I strive for in…[Read more]

@jonas

I really like this! The main thing I haven’t heard about yet is the characters. Is it going to play out in a similar way to Stormlight, where the characters at random points come across their abilities? I really like Krenna as well, but she seems highly resonant to both Shallan and Steven Leeds (I don’t know if you’re aware of the latter,…[Read more]

@anyone

I would like to revive this forum. Something that I have wondered about for a while now has to do with the necessity of the holly ghost in the trinity. I myself am non-trinitarian, but I was curious on what any of y’alls thoughts were on it if you have any.

@jonas

Sorry, I haven’t been on for a while, allow me to quickly express my thoughts here and there form when I’ve last been here.

I would be open to extended elements, but I worry that it would be more cliche than just the four Greek elements. I at one point had a draft for a lightning element, but I couldn’t think of anything interesting to d…

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@fernweh_grace

Hmm, so my worldbuilding is pretty solid, and very real for me, because I literally have places based off of real things. For example, I have an underground trade city in the Nevari Desert that is directly based off of Derinkuyu, Cappadocia. I have a whole tribe that has ties to the Basotho, geographically, and culturally, and I…

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@freedomwriter76

I totally understand your concern.

I’d say that in the first chapter that’s in his POV, showcase his positive character traits, but also give us a glimpse into his internal conflict so we see that he isn’t as perfect as he seems on the outside. Slowly revealing his backstory like you said you’d do will also help readers start t…[Read more]

Well, not free. Max needs a subscription.

You could always just find it for free on some sketchy website instead lol

@calyhuge

Ok I like that. Calligripho sounds cool.
@euodia-vision @whalekeeper

Lois

“A wonderful world, I must say.”

Felicity jumped to her feet in surprise and reached for her hip where her knives were normally slung. The boy who had spoke did not seem to mind. He slipped past her, joined their little circle, and opened a book.

“Would you l…[Read more]

*insert Christian swear words* pictures aren’t working again >:(

@whalekeeper

It’s free on Max (used to be called HBO Max idk why they changed it)

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr

Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!

(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)

(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Hello! Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy and am currently working on a universe with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

What does Calligripho look like? I’m imagining an old dude in a wizard hat, but I’m probably way off.