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@savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofetherium

Oh my, just got back from work, and had to catch up on everything.

Yes, I highly recommend the Stormlight Archive to anyone with the time for it. Sanderson is by far one of my very most favorite authors. He is a master of worldbuilding, character, and plot. He writes masterfully, but also with…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Hey Whale, just wanted to check in. I know you’ve been active, but haven’t made any response on this forum, so I’m perpetually worried that I may have offended you in any way by my words. In clarifying my meaning, I touched on some more sensitive topics, and I don’t want you to feel attacked or hurt in what I was saying. As you know…[Read more]

@aranel

Yes, it’s somewhat of a passion of mine.

Cool! Do you intend to embody that in your own writing?

Yes, same. I would like to try a story with soft worldbuilding, but it would take a lot of careful planning.

Yeah, it would be interesting to give a go. If I was ever to try it, I would probably blend it with hard worldbuilding, where there’s p…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

So I just read up to chapter 10, and it definitely has removed the issue of plot jumps. It still is jumping from so many POVs that it’s hard to connect with the characters on a deeper level yet, but once you start cycling back to Lilitu and Sef and whoever else, I think it should be fine.

I like Marcurious’s character as…[Read more]

@acancello @mineralizedwritings  @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @rae

Hedieh

Hedieh did a quick twirl in front of the mirror, watching the skirt of her dress spin around her. She bounced on her toes, happy to be wearing the sparkling, baby pink ball gown. It was her favorite color.

She did one last check of her hair and makeup, then…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, awesome! I’ll take a look then!

@savannah_grace2009

You definitely fixed a lot. Though I still think you got to connect the chapters a bit more, like how did Lilitu and Sef end up in the woods and why are they being hunted, as well as their relationship. You’ve might have already done this though, and simply not posted it on KP, have you done it on reedsy already, I’ll have to check.

@scoutfinch180

Hi! Nice to meet you, we haven’t met, but welcome back to KP!

Links have always been an issue on KP for as long as I’ve been on here. I’ve gotten by through simply pasting the link, then making a space after the first h, so it isn’t registered as a link, but others can copy it and remove the space to get access.

@scoutfinch180

Well, I see the link you posted. I’m not sure if that’s what you want or not. If you haven’t already, maybe try the link button at the top of the response box? 🤷🏻‍♀️ idk

@sarafini

That’s a great question! And actually, I’m planning to write a non-magical fantasy sometime in the future.

I think all you have to do is make the world unique. Magic doesn’t define fantasy, although it often is a big component of it. You can create different races, or different culture within one world or country. Whatever you want…[Read more]

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

Ok, since we have a weird guy to girl ration, I’ll go ahead and add in Hedieh. It’ll be fun. 😉

Amir

Amir squirmed in his seat, trying to get comfortable. He hated wearing this tight-fitting suit, but if it was for tradition, then he told himself he wou…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Well, like Solfyre pointed out, that depends on how much space the map covers. If it’s a world map, such details should be ignored, if it’s a city map, you could do it, but it can be hard depending on the size of the paper you have to make it, unless you can do it digitally. With city maps, as well as the level of detail you…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Thanks!! I will!

Yesss, for sure!! Oh yeah, it is! I’m pretty sure it’s Nia. I think it’s an illustration from the…. second or third book. I can’t remember which one.

Hello, nice to meet you! As for your first question, I cannot answer, lol. (I’m wondering, can you? I love asking other people this question, but for me, my characters are my children and I can’t pick favorites.)

Lol, I totally get that. XD I’m not sure, tbh. Sometimes it changes depending on my mood. 😂 But most of the time, I love writing one o…[Read more]