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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
What are y’all’s thoughts on my depiction of Thing?

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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ok, first, before all the cool stuff, I’ll introduce the standard Shome’el sword and shield:

There isn’t much to say about the sword, but I like the design. As for the shield (front and side profile) It is designed with a curved body, that forms a kind of pseudo roof. This is because of the nature of Omialia being in a space of…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I that’s how I did it actually now checking the original document:
You’re telling me. I had more questions, but held my tongue because Thing’s current track record hasn’t been the most helpful for answering them, other than explaining my inability to eat.
Thanks Jonas for explaining what made sense in my head, but c…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 10 months ago
helloooo!!!
So for Wix, you can use a template and customize it or start from scratch and design everything how you want it! It’s pretty easy to use once you get the hang of finding your way around. But you can make it all your own, put things where you want them, etc.
Let me know if you have any questions!
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Euodia replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 10 months ago
YAY! So excited for you!!! It looks great!!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
A fair concern. Despite his reputation, Sanderson has left his readers on edge for extended periods of time with little word, take The Rithmatist for example. That being said, that was more of a side project that he’s simply been putting off, whereas Stormlight is one of his biggest series, and he’s far more invested. Knowing him, I would…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
It’s so hard to just pick one main character out of the set of five, though! I love all them equally!!! XD
That’s fair. I think you can make it work as well, it is harder for smaller stories though, but not impossible.
This is funny, to me it feels like they’re my best friends and if I choose one over the other they’ll get m…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Okay, that’s kind of what I was thinking. I don’t know if it needs to be clearer or not. I don’t know how many other people would notice, and I already had a guess as to why. So maybe rewording it slightly would clear things up.
Ok, fair enough, I’ll tweak it then.
If you’re attached to it, I don’t think it needs to change at any point. It…
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
It looks like a unicorn tail to me, but probably not to other people. Also, the green is on their backs, necks, backs of their arms and hands, and on their noses.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
And here’s what the tail looks like

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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Hey you’re back!
Also, I can’t banish the image of little green martian girls with brown hair and sparkly unicorn tails from my mind. It hurts. Help.
Lol yeah idk why I keep giving terrible descriptions of my characters when I can just

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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Ok, I actually didn’t know that it would be different characters, but it makes sense. Sanderson likes exploring the different eras.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Cool! That’s a really cool concept. Crystal swords as an idea has always felt a little fantasy cliché to me, but the mechanic you built into it is actually really intriguing! It’s kind of like a memory metal (is that what it’s based off of), but it disappears instead of getting distorted, so that’s a really powerful material. Just make sure…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, I agree with the majority of what Jonas already said. Although I think smaller stories can have many prospective, but it has to be done right. I could think of a few examples, though most are more contemporary, but I’m sure there’s many fantastical. I think a cast of 5 or 6 is a fair enough amount that won’t be…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, it’s odd. She wanted me to help her prep for NaNoWriMo:(
I like this chapter! My favorite part was how happy the robot got when he named her “Thing”. that was great!
Lol! Thanks! I’m glad it seems to be producing an enjoyable dynamic between the two😂
Great chapter! The bounce between present and past tense was very conf…
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@calyhuge @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76
Would one of you guys like to go in the snack thieves group, or would you like me to?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh I love lynxes! She sounds pretty.
Eddie
“No…”
The three girls had now turned together and were now following the crowd of students towards the main doors of the school. Eddie had to speak louder to be heard over the chattering around them, which wasn’t a problem for her.
“But I’d love to learn electric guitar. Or drums maybe.…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago

okay i should probably be done for now…
but guys ^^…
it kills me
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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago

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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago

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