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@rae

I really liked it!

Everyone else already mentioned the main thing I noticed, which was everything was a little confusing. There were a lot of run-on sentences that had so much action and I was unable to keep track of who was doing what. 😅 But besides that I thought it was really good and I am very intrigued.

@freedomwriter76

Waaait, so what’s the fanfic about???

You have peaked my interest with that first part…👀

@smiley

AHHHH

I love this idea, Miley!! I love everyone you included including this new OC…

@loopylin @princesachronicle22 @rae I’m so sorry I took so long to get around to this y’all 🙁

Tyler

I blinked, racking my brain for any locations that matched Duvaal and The Sultaian desert, but couldn’t recall any.

But that’s not surprising. I never have been exactly good at geometry…

“I don’t think I’ve heard of that before,” I said q…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah same for me right now.

And you don’t sound weird.

Also, Felicity is giving me problems right now but I am working on an rp

@whalekeeper

I honestly do not want to jump into this extra mall yet 😅

Fair enough XD

Also, I love Pigeon already he sounds adorable

@rae

yeah, sorry, My brain kinda died.

No, you’re fine. XD

Fynn

Fynn shoved his hands into his pockets as they fell into an awkward silence. Thankfully, he didn’t have to come up with anything to say as he saw Callista by the front doors standing next to a girl with blue hair and horse of the same color.

“Hey, Callie!”

She looked up and smi…[Read more]

@keilah-h

You can do a lot of things with an AI, but it depends on the model, and how you phrase a lot of things. I had to phrase it as a “game” for ChatGPT, otherwise it would say that it doesn’t have opinions, and I had to tell it to not list different views, because the point is to pit two different views against one another. GPT is also quite…[Read more]

At least, that’s what I think is going on. Someone correct me if I’m wrong.

@loopylin

Oh, ok. Gotcha

@Esther-c

Ok, there are two malls: one completely normal mall that is really big and currently crowded with students, and then there’s Caly’s mall that I think is from his WIP which is invisible, and only his characters and Dante currently know about it. If you want to go dress shopping, you might want to go to the normal mall.

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!! She’s really fun to write. 😉

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, but I’m doing better now. Haha, ikr? XD The Captain America movies are amazing🤩

That’s good! 😊

Yesss! One time when I was babysitting, the little boy I was watching was taking a nap, so his parents had let me use their tv. I was watching the first Captain America movie and the captions were on and I didn’t know how to turn…[Read more]

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76

I forget too. XD We can just pretend Ami and Clint have met up with Bucky and Riya already, if you guys are ok with that.

@rae

(btw, Fynn and Lukas are friends, not brothers. 😉 Sorry I didn’t explain that earlier. 😅)

Fynn

“Thanks. I-I’m from Shyton.” Chase paused for a moment. “You?”

“Huh, never heard of Shyt…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I watch ALL of them. I’ve watched pretty much all of his more recent videos, so I’ve been driven to watching his older content as well lol.

Me too! I miss some of his older series, but his modern content is still really good.

Oh dear, I believe we’re hijacking this thread 🤣 at least we’re not talking about Brandon Sanders…

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@highscribeofaetherium

So do you follow his more recent content? Or do you like to watch more of his older videos?

The perfect response to anything!

“I like sandwiches”

“but what about DRAGONS?”

“Hey, want to go out sometime?”

“but what about DRAGONS?”

“Will you marry me?”

“BuT wHaT AbOUt DRRAGOONS????”

@highscribeofaetherium

Yooooo, let’s gooooooooo!!!!

Shad’s the best!

@highscribeofaetherium

Thanks! Wait… do you watch Shadaversity????

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas

I was thinking the same thing actually. They’re both pretty short, so perhaps you could add a chapter break, but even that isn’t necessary. I know why you did it, in order to have the chapter end on a good emotional climax, so I’d say you can do it either way, but it can still function as one whole scene.

@savannah_grace2009

I like this chapter as well! So for some reason I thought that the Andromedans were not aware of Earth, but if they are, and even know some random facts about it’s current modern day, including some sayings, then Fit as a Fiddle could become a common saying there.